A shadowed creature can be seen on a distant hilltop overlooking Ponyville as the unicorns' magic begin to go awry. Twilight wakes with a start as she realizes that she has slept in for possibly the first time in her life and missed the day out with her friend Rarity. When the magic of every unicorn in Ponyville suddenly begins to have a mind of its own, the lavender unicorn finds herself unable to even use her own magic. Soon she finds herself face to face with a new breed of creature whose intentions for the meager town are unknown.
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So.... ya just forget to put an ending there or... run out of time or... what? Just sort'a... stops...
254681 Yeah I'm sorry about that. Seeing as it was only a quick write for the February Write Off I didn't have enough time to give it a definite ending and still review it with my editor
. Besides the ending though, is there any other constructive criticism you can offer about content/flow/details? 