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Poor Jonah. Cursed to live his life a fraud, a sham, a lowlife due to forces outside of his control.

But he knows how to fix it! The plan is simple: Fix his bloodline via the most powerful ponies in the land, The Elements of Harmony.

At least, it was simple... until a certain pony messed with things...

This is his Journal.

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Smirkythread #1 · Jul 25th, 2013 · · ·

Well, I hate him already, good work on that actually. His name is odd for a pony but that's a complaint worth little merit. Otherwise, I don't see many problems except for a few typos.

One question really, will this contain rape and/or instant love?

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