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DODGING RESPONSIBILITY AT MACH 20!

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Ever wonder what would happen if a pony got sent to another world? Bluegrass may have wondered at one time, but thanks to the Great and Tyrannical Trixie he no longer does.

Trapped on another world, Bluegrass finds himself in an underground chamber where his species is practically unheard-of. Desperately trying to return to Ponyville to protect his cousin, he finds that the prospect of leaving the new world unscathed is impossible.

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this shows promise. WORK SLAVE!

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You merely think that I am the slave, but I am the master!

2944038 I WILL BOIL YOU ALIVE IN HOT TAR!!!

2944213 I'M PAYING YOU TO WRITE A STORY NOT ARGUE WITH YOU OVER SUCH TRIVIAL THINGS! NOW GET BACK TO WORK!

Comment posted by Uberdeathninja deleted Jul 28th, 2013

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That thing is so adorable!

What is it?

I find this story interesting as it is one of the few good dungeon keeper stories I have ever seen, and it manages to cross it over with my little ponies. And make it good. I'll be watching this with great interest. (Poor Poor ponykeeper though... he still doesn't really get what he's gotten into yet...)

ya know I was just rereading DKA not too long ago. then I stumble onto this.

still, this looks like it will be interesting, you have my attention.

The Clockworklich sent me here by his story The Beating Of My Heart and i must say i like what i have read so far.:pinkiehappy:
Hope you'll continue this one day :pinkiesmile:

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Oh hai.

Well, that was nice of him. I'll get to this one eventually, but Your Summon is Pink takes precedence.

Okay, I came here because of Beating of My Heart, and so far, this has both comedic and serious potential. Comedic because pony Keeper, serious because of the open ended potential of Dungeon Keeper. Seriously, from what little I do understand of the games, you are just given a dungeon and told to make stuff.

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That's kinda how it goes, yeah.
Both the original and the remake (made by the same dev team) are over on GOG.com. The dev team was planning on making another game when EA bought them out and cancelled all of their projects.

I hope you intend to continue this, it's great so far!

Ohohohohoh.. yyyeeesss.

So many rooms, items, traps, and even minions. Old and new, as well as possible modifications as options. Because what says (besides the author) that he can't experiment, and make new variants like what he did to the imps.

P.s (1.) he should probably check out which variant (or variants) are the best (or the best at certain things), (2.) so that he doesn't waste time and gets stuff done with the best imps that he has access to.

(1.) He should probably do this with the rooms, items, traps, and other minions as well (the variant thing). When he has the time, at the current moment the best course of action would be to solidify hes position. Which means it's time for him to build his dungeon.

(2.) Because through my experience in the games: wasted time = better prepared heros, more heros, and/or sometimes heros that send you back in progress via exploding your stuff or killing your minions.

And were is he? dungeon keeper (a.k.a dungeon keeper 1), dungeon keeper 2, war for the overworld (a.k.a dungeon keeper 3), or is he in a sort of middle ground of all of them?

If he's in the middle ground he'll have more stuff to experiment with, and maybe he'll even make some new rooms, items, traps, etc himself.

Oh. I almost forgot. Insert true, but repeated statement here:

Ohh. And remember my comments are only suggestions (unless written to be other wise), because unlike others (you know who you are) I don't force my opinion.

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