Fire is an earth pony who figures out that he is a pyromancer- a pony that weilds fire magic. Discord is returning, and he and his friend Ice aid the Elements of Harmony in Discord's defeat.
(Note: Cursing. Not much, but sometimes it can get a bit... colorful...
Note2: Removed Sad tag because the tragedy part isn't so much to change the entire fic. Also, added Alternate Universe tag because Discord was banished instead of being turned to stone.
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I feel... weird reading this. But it's looking good!
237402 which kind of weird?
horrable - horrible
parental instead of parently
immediently - immediately
"mabye spy on the" That ones obvious.
You also used "Tho" At one point, not sure what you were typing there to be honest.
And Fire says hews not sure how "Fir" can be a special talent. Thats all the mispells that I noticed.
there is also a lot of "i" instead of "I"
Also, whats with him eyeballing his caretaker? They aren't related but its still a little...Weird.
that's about it...I like it, just a bit awkward...
239417 caretaker-3 years older than him. not really, but hey, Fire's a perv. and a jerk. btw thanks
239417 and i almost never capitalise the word i- just trying to humble myself
239437 Don't get me wrong, I would look too. Its just funny. And no problem, if you need me to look over the next one I can do that too. I'm in a pretty "Helping" mood today..
does it work? i never tried. i don't think i can do it... Nope, I enjoy my capital I.
239446 and could you help me out with location? as in exact spot? I can't find parental and immediently
239475 Well, sure, But you could just Ctrl+F thats how I find my typos.
"I thought you cared about me enough to at least turn around while you yell..." Oh dang I was good. Ice, being as over-protective, parently, and loving as she is, immediently broke down, the kitchen was filled with her sobs and apologies. Near the start of the first split. The both of them are right there.
239446 wait where did I say tho?
239496 what the hell?????? how did i type h instead of w??? (i found tho)
239524 It happens to the best of us. I still find stupid mistakes like that all over the place. Its always gonna happen, just gonna make sure you have someone to point them out. If you've just written the chapter and you check over it by yourself? Your likely to misread a lot of words as proper. Thankfully I have a brother who reads over my stories and points out where I screwed up (Most of the time) so its all good.
Correction: Celestia did not use the magic boost being an alicorn gave her to defeat Discord. She instead teamed up with Luna and used the elements of harmony to encased him in a stone prison.
240845 wait, what???
240845 Bro, this is a fic. be quiet.
Hmmm, there's something about that name that makes something tick....
242884. Wow. Just wow.
243666 Not sure if your mad or suprised.
243721 nethier. just lol
Is it just me or does Fire remind anypony else of one of those pervert characters in an anime?
245766 Don't worry, it you don't like how Fire gets distracted with Ice's bod, then i can make her begin to notice it and through a long process NOT be perverted anymore. (as in book 2) yes i ALWAYS write sequels.
245801 It's not a problem. Honestly I think those characters pull off some great LOL moments.
245832
yay an LOL reaction!
Okay, to be honest this borders on rediculos how similar half the stuff in this is like my first fic. Ice, Wolfy(Fire) everfree when he discovered *Throws arms up* DAM IT TALOS!
Thinking of mares even when being attacked by timberwolves... I don't know whether I should yell SWAG or laugh at what I read afterwards
SWAG
I like'd this story. I fav'd this story. I watch'd you. now PLEASE continue this!!!!!
Badass. also first.
Minimal negotiation... Fire must have a high Speech ski- Wait...
(Activate Royal Canterlot Voice)
DAMN YOU BETHESDA! DAMN YOU FOR MAKING FALLOUT SUCH AN ADDICTING GAME!
Anyway, 'bout time an update appeared.
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