• Member Since 3rd Feb, 2012
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IceFire


I aren't very good at writing, but I love to write!

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Sky blue Was raised by The Master. She must do as he says. Master saved her when she was almost killed by Princess Celestia, but when The Mane 6 save her from possible death in the EverFreeForest, and explain the culture of the so-called villian, who is she to believe?

It started off as a redo of a pony story I did ages ago (it was terrible) and is turning out to be completely different! This is my first story, please read!

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 9 )

Accepting constructive critism! (Please!)

What's with the crazy punctuation?
Stars instead of speech marks? What is the world coming to?

It is because she has lost her voice, you're not really talking if you've lost you're voice.

Interesting concept:pinkiecrazy:....can't wait to see were this goes.:twilightsheepish:
Keep writin' and readin' :eeyup:

Cool! But you say 'cutie mark' and then CutieMark. make up your mind.

'"In the name of RainbowDash!" While I wondered what RanbowDash had to do with this, they carried on,' hehe, funny!

good chapter cant wait for the next:twilightsmile:

Yay! thank you everypony for your support!

I expect the dislikes would have been for alternate spellings of words. No offence, but I have noted a couple of spelling and punctuation mistakes. :applejackunsure:

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