Lasthorizon
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The intro was pretty good.
Then It went (down hill) In a good way
Instead the word "vag" replace it with sex.That trem is a bit clean and a lot of people using it.
There one tiny error"man and tail" *mane
I like it.
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Thanks, fixed. I never really got the term sex as a replacment for vagina, but figuring "vag" isn't even a word I changed it anyways.
2956368 No problem.
hue
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I saw this before. Thanks, I guess.
Friends don't let friends go out in the heat.
Semi-rape isn't a thing. Imagine a criminal saying, "Oh, I just kind of raped her." I don't think the judges would let that fly.
I loved this story.
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Struggle snuggle?