Twilight has heard rumors of a plant in the Everfree which resists magic. She decides to find and study this plant, and present the findings to Celestia. Unfortunately, the plant has other plans for her.
So, we're reaching the endgame now? Neat. Poor Mr. Cake though. Whatever happened to Mrs Cake and the twins? Are they really safe? Anyway, I'll check out your other story sooner or later. Hard vore tends to creep me out but you make it sound so appealing
........i see no appeal to this story. and i am a bit into the vorish stuff from time to time too. albeit nothing with rent body parts............ or more of ten than not demise.
seriously the plot is rather dumb over all and distracts from........ basically everything. its meant to be a story with a plot, and the plot is just bad overall.
you, kaidan, are and enigma. equally able to write confusing acid trips like this yet stories with actual plot and intrigue in them........... just find it strange.
This whole, "suddenly Gaia is an old god"-thing kinda surprised me. Didn't Twi name her Gaia because she was the first plant she grew from that all the others she had came? Or was that already Gaia's influence?
Also, dick move from Luna. "You can't be allowed to win. I'd rather kill everything than let that happen." Seems a bit too destructive, but then again, I have no idea what they went through in Gaia's time. Wouldn't justify omnicide though.(I hope that this works somewhat as a word) I think what threw me for a loop the most was the sudden change in tone. At least it seems that way to me.
Written while drunk. Because Pinkie Pie. - Kaidan 6th Jul 2013
I don't decide what gets popular, but when this got popular, I bought some more hard liquor and kept on writing the story drunk... so yeah, there really wasn't a plot or a plan. Just plants, rape, and a dash of Vore.
3991901 So far the other story has been as soft as this one, but this story is going to get hard when plants start tearing limbs off ponies. I suppose I may need to update the tags.
3992126 It might have as few as one chapter left. I wanted to set up a good old fashioned war between plant and pony. and the only plant sex/vore not covered was hard vore. I don't know why I made up backstory, either. I blame writing it sober.
Now that I think of it... you could totally have some throwback chapters to when Gaia ruled, what she did under her reign, and how Celestia and Luna overthrew her.
3992399 Well, then to your statement about her being unable to do anything "The stars will aid in her escape" This could be interpreted as NMM slowly getting the stars into position to make a favorable constellation or somesuch to help herself. So she could have had some way to train. And even if progress would be incredibly small, if you stretch it out over a thousand years...
such an odd story, so gaia is a being of chaotic magic and corrupted twilight and the elements? so unless someone stops gaia and saves luna the moon will destroy the planet. so far so good.
the god of the sun vs the paraciticle plant fire vs grass take a guess oh and the majora's mask moon on a coliseon course all celestia has to do is light EVERYTHING on fire
Ugh, the direction this story is going in is not one I particularly enjoy. Specifically, the violent deaths and pain being inflicted. Just because it's killing them doesn't mean it can't kill them with pleasure :( There was so much potential at the beginning too.
Item: SCP-2101 Object Class: Keter Special containment procedures: SCP-2101 is to be contained in a 15m x 15m steel plated ro..... ...Terminated as soon as possible.... ... Direct order from O5-X.... Containment acquisition pending.
3995334 well, that or unconscious in that pod or being milked for sperm. the latter infind higly unlikely due to him being so you- oh no that means 0_0 gaias probably killed poundcake... ;_; oh every religious prophet CELESTIA BURN IT TO THE GROUND!!! NOTHING IS FIRE PROOF!!! BURN IT ALL IN A CLEANSING HOLY FIRE TO SAVE THEIR SOULS!!
I'll check out vore is magic, but the main kink that brought e here was the plants. A never ending plant orgy would be the best thing ever.
Still. Thank you for the wild, wild ride of Gaia. May this plant porn forever inhabit my hard drive.
ALL HAIL GAIA. PRAISE GAIA!
Little Post-it note here: Are you still doing the balloon pony shorts? I do so love reading of latex ponies. Also, I can't remember, but have you written of mobile latex/balloon ponies? Probably my biggest kink is beings that live life out as latex. NNNF.
Oh god, I could have sworn that I fav'd this story a long time ago. Was just checking in, wondering why I hadn't seen it update for months. Apparently it has been this whole time!
Well, now I have five new chapters to read, woo!
EDIT: Two days later, and I've caught up to current. My god, this story is fucking awesome.
Turner, even when you aren't the Doctor, you are still so cool. Hope you don't die. Or you die and are released from your mental hellish prison.
She saw the two in bed, shocked, having just felt the earthquake hit Canterlot.
Surprised they felt it, they were no doubt making more powerful earthquakes in the bedroom.
Funny as always, but I'm a dark gallow humour kind of guy. Hope to see what happened to our captive background pony friends... Speaking of, I think the only ones we missed were Lyra, Bonbon and Octavia. Not a bad score if you were trying to collect them all.
I saw what you did there
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I tried to resist, I almost changed it at the last minute... then I left it in.
So, we're reaching the endgame now? Neat. Poor Mr. Cake though. Whatever happened to Mrs Cake and the twins? Are they really safe?
Anyway, I'll check out your other story sooner or later. Hard vore tends to creep me out but you make it sound so appealing
(Chuckles, smiles bemusedly) Wat.....?
........i see no appeal to this story. and i am a bit into the vorish stuff from time to time too. albeit nothing with rent body parts............ or more of ten than not demise.
seriously the plot is rather dumb over all and distracts from........ basically everything. its meant to be a story with a plot, and the plot is just bad overall.
you, kaidan, are and enigma. equally able to write confusing acid trips like this yet stories with actual plot and intrigue in them........... just find it strange.
Also, poor Colgate. She got eaten by Pinkie Pie... again...
Ugh, wasn't she a part of the moon? It'd be difficult to learn something like that when banished in the moon
3991957 Yeah, admittedly I kinda wished it had stayed more on the soft side of the spectrum.
This whole, "suddenly Gaia is an old god"-thing kinda surprised me. Didn't Twi name her Gaia because she was the first plant she grew from that all the others she had came? Or was that already Gaia's influence?
Also, dick move from Luna. "You can't be allowed to win. I'd rather kill everything than let that happen." Seems a bit too destructive, but then again, I have no idea what they went through in Gaia's time. Wouldn't justify omnicide though.(I hope that this works somewhat as a word)
I think what threw me for a loop the most was the sudden change in tone. At least it seems that way to me.
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3992105 Yeah, I admit that I'd have preferred that as well. But I'll see where Kaidan goes with it.
3992105 writin i find off too............. weird, weird, dumb plot.
think part of it is because i know he can do a lot better?
3991957
I don't decide what gets popular, but when this got popular, I bought some more hard liquor and kept on writing the story drunk... so yeah, there really wasn't a plot or a plan. Just plants, rape, and a dash of Vore.
3991901
So far the other story has been as soft as this one, but this story is going to get hard when plants start tearing limbs off ponies. I suppose I may need to update the tags.
3992126
It might have as few as one chapter left. I wanted to set up a good old fashioned war between plant and pony. and the only plant sex/vore not covered was hard vore. I don't know why I made up backstory, either. I blame writing it sober.
Sweet Celestia I love these plant-hentai stories
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3992126 I know, I realised my mistake (hence why I corrected it) *walks into corner of shame*
Now that I think of it... you could totally have some throwback chapters to when Gaia ruled, what she did under her reign, and how Celestia and Luna overthrew her.
I could see that being interesting.
3991876 You... probably should have taken it out, honestly.
So next up is the final battle of plant vs. pony? With everypony we care about on the wrong side? (No one likes Shining Armor.) Nya ha ha ha ha.
3992399 Well, then to your statement about her being unable to do anything
"The stars will aid in her escape" This could be interpreted as NMM slowly getting the stars into position to make a favorable constellation or somesuch to help herself. So she could have had some way to train. And even if progress would be incredibly small, if you stretch it out over a thousand years...
such an odd story, so gaia is a being of chaotic magic and corrupted twilight and the elements? so unless someone stops gaia and saves luna the moon will destroy the planet. so far so good.
Pinkie Pie!
...
U jelly?
fun, hope luna catches a break though, spikes are no fun
speaking of... what happened to spike?
Does anybody have some weed killer?
3992400 I agree with this.
So much awesome. Here are a Fluttershy and a Rainbow Dash ahegao for reasons that are only clear to me.
KBO.
the god of the sun vs the paraciticle plant
fire vs grass
take a guess
oh and the majora's mask moon on a coliseon course
all celestia has to do is light
EVERYTHING on fire
I BURN!
3993904 probably dead
I like Luna as being much less corruptible than anyone else due to her history, but what's sexier than revealing her as a minion to Celestia?
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noooooooooooooooos!!!!
Ugh, the direction this story is going in is not one I particularly enjoy. Specifically, the violent deaths and pain being inflicted. Just because it's killing them doesn't mean it can't kill them with pleasure :( There was so much potential at the beginning too.
get the flame based weaponry out, burn pony ville to the ground.
Can't wait for the next chapter
Item: SCP-2101
Object Class: Keter
Special containment procedures:
SCP-2101 is to be contained in a 15m x 15m steel plated ro.....
...Terminated as soon as possible....
... Direct order from O5-X....
Containment acquisition pending.
Well, this went from pornographic to boner-killing over two paragraphs. I'm looking at you, Raritree.
And then this sudden development with the plotline... ehh. If it had been set up from the beginning, then sure, but it seems kinda tacked-on.
Ah well, I was reading this for the story anyways, oh well.
3995334 well, that or unconscious in that pod or being milked for sperm. the latter infind higly unlikely due to him being so you- oh no
that means 0_0
gaias probably killed poundcake... ;_;
oh every religious prophet
CELESTIA BURN IT TO THE GROUND!!!
NOTHING IS FIRE PROOF!!!
BURN IT ALL IN A CLEANSING HOLY FIRE TO SAVE THEIR SOULS!!
4084005
no! not poundcake!!!!
not spike!!!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH MR.CAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
>“Madness?” Twilight chuckled. “This. Is. Ponyville!”
-You lose 1 Internet point.
Also, possible pain/death/torture of Luna... A weird ''suicidal-let's all die together for the ?greater good?'' plot point...
Compared to the previous parts, this one failed quite a bit, I say. And not exactly ''exciting''... Seriously, what happened there ?
4004971 Um, isn't it a bit late to be calling it an Object?
I'll check out vore is magic, but the main kink that brought e here was the plants. A never ending plant orgy would be the best thing ever.
Still. Thank you for the wild, wild ride of Gaia. May this plant porn forever inhabit my hard drive.
ALL HAIL GAIA. PRAISE GAIA!
Little Post-it note here: Are you still doing the balloon pony shorts? I do so love reading of latex ponies. Also, I can't remember, but have you written of mobile latex/balloon ponies? Probably my biggest kink is beings that live life out as latex. NNNF.
I love your writing, Kaidan.
Still loving this story.
Oh god, I could have sworn that I fav'd this story a long time ago.
Was just checking in, wondering why I hadn't seen it update for months. Apparently it has been this whole time!
Well, now I have five new chapters to read, woo!
EDIT:
Two days later, and I've caught up to current. My god, this story is fucking awesome.
Oh, I pray that Celestia brings an end to this....she better not fail.
We miss you! Please come back!!!
Turner, even when you aren't the Doctor, you are still so cool. Hope you don't die. Or you die and are released from your mental hellish prison.
Surprised they felt it, they were no doubt making more powerful earthquakes in the bedroom.
Funny as always, but I'm a dark gallow humour kind of guy. Hope to see what happened to our captive background pony friends... Speaking of, I think the only ones we missed were Lyra, Bonbon and Octavia. Not a bad score if you were trying to collect them all.
So, next chapter, everyone dies?
burn em' Tia!!!
This. This would be amazing.
"Praise be Gaia" Praise!
Holy ****
The end is neigh! The massive moon is going to wipe out all life in equestrians.
Could you imagine that a tiny magical horse could just launch a giant rock at you?
I mean holy ****! Sure! Lets just toss the friggin MOON!
dawn of the third day. 24 hours remaining
It's the final countdown!