Twilight has heard rumors of a plant in the Everfree which resists magic. She decides to find and study this plant, and present the findings to Celestia. Unfortunately, the plant has other plans for her.
2901069 If I ever stop a story, I at least put an ending together first. This hiatus is like a Season 1/2 break of a TV show. I really need to stop writing clop long enough to release Dollhouse II (which has been in various states of editing for two straight months.)
This story in particular is too good to stop. I also want to do one called "My Little Pony: Friendship is Vore" so it can be more than just plants...
2901242 Let's hope the plants are just sexing/brainwashing/impregnating/enjoying the mares and not eating/dissolving/absorbing/murdering the mares.
I was literally just trying to make up a way to make the name "Gaia" have a deep, ominous/something reason to be and force my brain into saying "Yeah, that makes complete sense!"
2902609 One in the pooper, one in the stomach? Or maybe the plant is just strangling him to death because nopony likes spike?
2901574 You need only ask. I like the premise enough to write it for free. You may want to set some ground rules or boundries though, if you have a preference for certain 'fetishes'.
While the story could go either way, having the plants turn out to be truly carnivorous rather than just hungry (for sex, heh) would make for a short tale. Personally, I'd not have the ponies turned into fertilizer and instead continue with the sexual nomnoms. Ultimately, this is yours so feel free to ignore us in the peanut gallery.
2902644 Why does everypony hate Spike? I know he isn't the best character in the show, but come on. Luigi wasn't the best character in the Mario games and look where he is now.
2902917 Where is Luigi now? I'm fairly certain he hasn't starred in a video game since N64, and Mario won't shut his mouth. I actually saw a toilet training game that he starred in.
I don't hate Spike though, I just know how to give my fans what they want.
2902703 And so we return to the problem every story has. You can't kill off the main characters... and yeah, I want it to go a lot longer when I start writing again so...
2902793 Hybrids probably. They were already absorbing some of their traits. Now they're taking the time to thoroughly enjoy their 'guests'.
2902995 Oh yeah, then what about, Luigi's Mansion: Dark Moon, Super Luigi U and that new Mario & Luigi game all about him, how do you like them apples. (I am not trying to sound like a jerk, thank you.)
2903177 Nope, never heard of them. As far as I know, those were Mario games about rescuing Mario, and the only person left to rescue him just happened to be his brother.
2903029 Almost as much as me... I mean, Twilight and their guests are enjoying the plants.
2903054 I'm considering what level of powers / transfers between the ponies and their plants to give them. I'm fairly certain Twilight will retain the ability to sense and feel what any of her plants feel, due to her connection to Gaia. Other abilities/attributes may vary by pony. For instance, Dash is certainly going to enjoy tight-fitting flight suits a whole lot more after this.
2903561The Idea certainly sounds interesting, and because it's on hiatus you have some extra time to think over the ideas. I'm a bit disappointed to see this go on hiatus for a while, but you're a person that I trust to actually come back to it, and not forget about it.
PS: "My Little Pony: Friendship is Vore", I support this idea, if and when you get to it. PPS: You are correct, no one likes Spike.
Well... I suppose you can off a main character. The problem is they're all liked and they like each other. Assuming the ponies haven't been utterly brainwashed, they would naturally flip the hell out on the plants and raze the garden to the scorched earth below.
Now if it was a main character no one liked (the characters, not us, because apparently a bunch of the readers here would pick Spike to get kicked off the island) then no one would shed a tear if they got chomped. Well. Fluttershy would, but she cries over everything.
In any case, this is first and foremost a fetish story. We can ignore most rules of common sense (and plot holes) and dive straight back into the frolicking foliage. And if it's not ripping off Nintendo enough, we can somehow invent a pony version of a 1-UP so a nommed pony isn't gone for good.
The thing is honestly I think that Celestia wouldn't allow these plants to survive much longer if they end up killing Twilight and her friends. The sun can be both helpful and harmful to a plant. Such as turning the tree they're in into a massive bonfire.
And honestly with how many images of Twilight that Celestia had pulled up in magical mystery cure. (Many of which she had no way of being present for.) I'm pretty damn sure there's some magical bug deep in her soul that Celestia's tapping into. Something that let's her know immediately if she needs to kill a bitch. Something that CANNOT be removed. Even by discord or other god-like beings.
2908951 The only problem with your metaphor, is that the Mane 6 (basically the most powerful and one of the only heroes) want the plants to win. And another reason I want the plants to win, well, besides the fact it goes against the cliche that good wins, is that the plants don't give a reason for what they're doing. It could be to 'conquer the world', or it could be 'survive', we don't know. The reason I am a fan of pro-human TCB is because the ponies gave reasons (bullshit reasons I might add). And that gave us a reason to hate them. We know what they are doing, and why they're doing it, and both make us hate them. With the plants, all we know is that they're brainwashing and fucking ponies to impregnate them and create more plants. We can come up with any sort of reason for it, however crazy. And, because its of our own creation, we want it to succeed a little bit. Unless you have a completely negative intention for them and dislike it in every way, coupled with the Unreliable Narrator, you root for the plants because of their unknown intentions and because it goes against mundane 'good' side, especially in the type of crowd that likes evil endings.
So I've got mixed feelings about all of this. On the one hand this kind of thing has always been of interest to me, but at the same time this is clearly the kind of story where the good guys (er, mares) lose. This wouldn't be so bad if I weren't filled with a very real horror for the inevitable end of pony society and the thought of all mares in existence becoming sex slaves to plants. These things are downright self-destructive: it's obvious they won't stop, but eventually in theory they would have all of ponydom under their control, which of course means the ponies themselves aren't breeding. Bye bye food source and both species. As the kind of person who sets an emotional attachment to characters and worlds, this is an unacceptable outcome.
As such I fully expect you to A) actually achieve total plant domination and B) find a loophole around the mutual extinction issue.
if I missed this detail tell me please kaiden now is the Connection between pony and plant. this is confusing. Is twilight hearing the plants, feeling the plants pain, being controlled or influenced by them is it taking over her mind, I can't understand what form of symbiosis is occurring here.
As I sat in the center of my favorite plant, two vines gently massaged by back and wings.
Who's speaking? Because Twilight doesn't have wings in this story. You specifically have called her a unicorn, not an alicorn, you never called her a princess, you never mentioned her wings before, you never mentioned her having sprouted wings inside the plant. Is it Dash talking? Why switch back to Twilight in the middle of a thought then? If twilight has had wings from the beginning, then why wouldn't she just have been flying out of the plant's reach, back when she thought it was a threat?
I'm really confused here, and I make a point of refusing to red anything with Twilicorn in it. Even the most fetishy, sexy porn out there, and if She's been an alicorn this whole time, I'm gonna have to stop reading, cause Princess Twilight kills my boner.
2928453 I wrote it in the midst of writing 50k words across 12 stories and 6 updates, and must have crossed two fuses in my mind. I always tag my alicorn Twilight stories with the little alicorn symbol... and you are right, she should be a normal old unicorn in this story. The only wings she gets will be if Gaia plants them in her shoulders, and they sprout into beautiful butterfly wings with deadly paralysis spores like Butterfree.... damn that's Ponymon, getting confused again.
I'll edit that "wings" out of that line and unconfuse people. Nice catch.
2911425 I gotta agree with this even though I have a feeling this story will end in the "happy" way of all clop fics where the plant will win and effectively rape all of Equestria. The mind control aspecet is especially apparent here. Twilight is more worried about this fucking rape plant than her own adoptive brother. Pretty sure Twilight is just a damn drone considering she's helping the plant by letting it rape all her friends.
Also with how this fic is currently going with Spike, it will either have underage death/rape.
2931249 When I write in a hurry and don't self-edit, I let my editor catch them. And when my editor gets upset at how often I make that mistake, he flips a table. I actually know the rule, I just don't care, lol. When I write a story of Dollhouse/Puppet caliber, I don't make as many silly mistakes.
2932680 Or the plants are smart enough to let the ponies procreate so it has a steady source of willing victims. Or, they become pony/plant hybrids and rely solely on the plants to mate, and give birth to more pony/plant hybrids. Or, they eat everypony and they all die.
Or my personal favorite in a plant vore story: The plants 'store' the ponies inside them in a state of eternal stimulation, never releasing them, and feeding off their juices. Imagine a thousand years of orgasm denial... hopefully, the plant isn't that cruel.
Things are getting Zerg-ish up in here! Seriously though, my theory is that it digests them and absorbs their consciousnesses into itself, so they can take over Equestria as their new plant overlords.
I vote hybrids. It keeps the mane cast in the story as more active in the plant domination process. I like how each is having a unique plant species claim them for a (seemingly) more permanent bonding.
Though vore isn't really my thing, I don't mind it as a sort of ultimate submission.
Oh, hell yes!
Good so far. I hope to know what happens next soon. I hope it doesn't end like the others on hiatus, eventually being forgotten.
and felt it throw itself at hisneck
It allowed her to breath
1. Forgot your spacing.
2. Breathe.
Assimilation successful? Now to stop here before I get all sappy
2901242
Literally.
2901069
If I ever stop a story, I at least put an ending together first. This hiatus is like a Season 1/2 break of a TV show. I really need to stop writing clop long enough to release Dollhouse II (which has been in various states of editing for two straight months.)
This story in particular is too good to stop. I also want to do one called "My Little Pony: Friendship is Vore" so it can be more than just plants...
2901242
Let's hope the plants are just sexing/brainwashing/impregnating/enjoying the mares and not eating/dissolving/absorbing/murdering the mares.
2901508
Elements of Plantery, go!
2901072
Thanks for the catches. I'm going to go imagine myself being absorbed by a plant now.
2901052
Eeyup.
2901563
What task must I perform for a Redheart medical clop? I am entirely at thy disposal.
lets see anypony left...
rarity, twi, pinky, flutters,dashy, AJ.... and spike too....
derpy?
big mac?
the princesses?
oh i cant wait to find out.
I was literally just trying to make up a way to make the name "Gaia" have a deep, ominous/something reason to be and force my brain into saying "Yeah, that makes complete sense!"
Spike to? how does that work?
2902609
One in the pooper, one in the stomach? Or maybe the plant is just strangling him to death because nopony likes spike?
2901574
You need only ask. I like the premise enough to write it for free. You may want to set some ground rules or boundries though, if you have a preference for certain 'fetishes'.
Oh, and feel free to tell everypony to love me.
2901563
While the story could go either way, having the plants turn out to be truly carnivorous rather than just hungry (for sex, heh) would make for a short tale. Personally, I'd not have the ponies turned into fertilizer and instead continue with the sexual nomnoms. Ultimately, this is yours so feel free to ignore us in the peanut gallery.
2901563 about that element of plantary will the new seeds be pony/plant hybrids infusing the DNA of both partners forming new elements?
2902644 Why does everypony hate Spike? I know he isn't the best character in the show, but come on. Luigi wasn't the best character in the Mario games and look where he is now.
<----Duckface
2902917
Where is Luigi now? I'm fairly certain he hasn't starred in a video game since N64, and Mario won't shut his mouth. I actually saw a toilet training game that he starred in.
I don't hate Spike though, I just know how to give my fans what they want.
2902703
And so we return to the problem every story has. You can't kill off the main characters... and yeah, I want it to go a lot longer when I start writing again so...
2902793
Hybrids probably. They were already absorbing some of their traits. Now they're taking the time to thoroughly enjoy their 'guests'.
2902995 well I'm pretty sure their enjoying their 'guests' :3
Perhaps Gaia is granting Twilight all the abilities that her friends have.
The liquid giving everyones attributes to her.
2902995 Oh yeah, then what about, Luigi's Mansion: Dark Moon, Super Luigi U and that new Mario & Luigi game all about him, how do you like them apples. (I am not trying to sound like a jerk, thank you.)
2903177
Nope, never heard of them. As far as I know, those were Mario games about rescuing Mario, and the only person left to rescue him just happened to be his brother.
2903029
Almost as much as me... I mean, Twilight and their guests are enjoying the plants.
2903054
I'm considering what level of powers / transfers between the ponies and their plants to give them. I'm fairly certain Twilight will retain the ability to sense and feel what any of her plants feel, due to her connection to Gaia. Other abilities/attributes may vary by pony. For instance, Dash is certainly going to enjoy tight-fitting flight suits a whole lot more after this.
2903561 BAHAHAHA YES SKIN THIGHT SUITS FOR DASH
2903561The Idea certainly sounds interesting, and because it's on hiatus you have some extra time to think over the ideas.
I'm a bit disappointed to see this go on hiatus for a while, but you're a person that I trust to actually come back to it, and not forget about it.
PS: "My Little Pony: Friendship is Vore", I support this idea, if and when you get to it.
PPS: You are correct, no one likes Spike.
2903554 I see what you did there. Bravo my good man, bravo
Please don't be on hiatus too long I LOVE THIS FIC
2902995
Well... I suppose you can off a main character. The problem is they're all liked and they like each other. Assuming the ponies haven't been utterly brainwashed, they would naturally flip the hell out on the plants and raze the garden to the scorched earth below.
Now if it was a main character no one liked (the characters, not us, because apparently a bunch of the readers here would pick Spike to get kicked off the island) then no one would shed a tear if they got chomped. Well. Fluttershy would, but she cries over everything.
In any case, this is first and foremost a fetish story. We can ignore most rules of common sense (and plot holes) and dive straight back into the frolicking foliage. And if it's not ripping off Nintendo enough, we can somehow invent a pony version of a 1-UP so a nommed pony isn't gone for good.
WHAT! HITAS!!! DAMN IT!!! KAIDEN WE LOVE YOU! DON'T GO ON HITAS!!!
Somehow, this feels fitting:
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The thing is honestly I think that Celestia wouldn't allow these plants to survive much longer if they end up killing Twilight and her friends. The sun can be both helpful and harmful to a plant. Such as turning the tree they're in into a massive bonfire.
And honestly with how many images of Twilight that Celestia had pulled up in magical mystery cure. (Many of which she had no way of being present for.) I'm pretty damn sure there's some magical bug deep in her soul that Celestia's tapping into. Something that let's her know immediately if she needs to kill a bitch. Something that CANNOT be removed. Even by discord or other god-like beings.
2901242 You make it sound as if you dont want the plants to win
2903561
>skin tight suits
>Wonderbolts uniform is a skin tight suit
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2908736 And thats why its so awesome! Evil winning is way better than good winning.
2908951 The only problem with your metaphor, is that the Mane 6 (basically the most powerful and one of the only heroes) want the plants to win.
And another reason I want the plants to win, well, besides the fact it goes against the cliche that good wins, is that the plants don't give a reason for what they're doing. It could be to 'conquer the world', or it could be 'survive', we don't know. The reason I am a fan of pro-human TCB is because the ponies gave reasons (bullshit reasons I might add). And that gave us a reason to hate them. We know what they are doing, and why they're doing it, and both make us hate them. With the plants, all we know is that they're brainwashing and fucking ponies to impregnate them and create more plants. We can come up with any sort of reason for it, however crazy. And, because its of our own creation, we want it to succeed a little bit. Unless you have a completely negative intention for them and dislike it in every way, coupled with the Unreliable Narrator, you root for the plants because of their unknown intentions and because it goes against mundane 'good' side, especially in the type of crowd that likes evil endings.
The plant could go anal on spike
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2908951 lol
2908951
I'm Kaidan Shepard, and this is my favorite post in the
citadelthreadSo I've got mixed feelings about all of this. On the one hand this kind of thing has always been of interest to me, but at the same time this is clearly the kind of story where the good guys (er, mares) lose. This wouldn't be so bad if I weren't filled with a very real horror for the inevitable end of pony society and the thought of all mares in existence becoming sex slaves to plants. These things are downright self-destructive: it's obvious they won't stop, but eventually in theory they would have all of ponydom under their control, which of course means the ponies themselves aren't breeding. Bye bye food source and both species. As the kind of person who sets an emotional attachment to characters and worlds, this is an unacceptable outcome.
As such I fully expect you to A) actually achieve total plant domination and B) find a loophole around the mutual extinction issue.
Because Kaidan.
if I missed this detail tell me please kaiden now is the Connection between pony and plant. this is confusing. Is twilight hearing the plants, feeling the plants pain, being controlled or influenced by them is it taking over her mind, I can't understand what form of symbiosis is occurring here.
So when is the next?
2903554
Actually the first two games don't even have marios appearance other than his hat.
Who's speaking? Because Twilight doesn't have wings in this story. You specifically have called her a unicorn, not an alicorn, you never called her a princess, you never mentioned her wings before, you never mentioned her having sprouted wings inside the plant. Is it Dash talking? Why switch back to Twilight in the middle of a thought then? If twilight has had wings from the beginning, then why wouldn't she just have been flying out of the plant's reach, back when she thought it was a threat?
I'm really confused here, and I make a point of refusing to red anything with Twilicorn in it. Even the most fetishy, sexy porn out there, and if She's been an alicorn this whole time, I'm gonna have to stop reading, cause Princess Twilight kills my boner.
2928453
I wrote it in the midst of writing 50k words across 12 stories and 6 updates, and must have crossed two fuses in my mind. I always tag my alicorn Twilight stories with the little alicorn symbol... and you are right, she should be a normal old unicorn in this story. The only wings she gets will be if Gaia plants them in her shoulders, and they sprout into beautiful butterfly wings with deadly paralysis spores like Butterfree.... damn that's Ponymon, getting confused again.
I'll edit that "wings" out of that line and unconfuse people. Nice catch.
Ahem...
Oooh,
If you want it to be possessive,
It's just I-T-S
But if it's supposed to be a contraction,
Then it's I-T-apostrophe-S... scalawag
2911425 I gotta agree with this even though I have a feeling this story will end in the "happy" way of all clop fics where the plant will win and effectively rape all of Equestria. The mind control aspecet is especially apparent here. Twilight is more worried about this fucking rape plant than her own adoptive brother. Pretty sure Twilight is just a damn drone considering she's helping the plant by letting it rape all her friends.
Also with how this fic is currently going with Spike, it will either have underage death/rape.
2931249
When I write in a hurry and don't self-edit, I let my editor catch them. And when my editor gets upset at how often I make that mistake, he flips a table. I actually know the rule, I just don't care, lol. When I write a story of Dollhouse/Puppet caliber, I don't make as many silly mistakes.
2932680
Or the plants are smart enough to let the ponies procreate so it has a steady source of willing victims. Or, they become pony/plant hybrids and rely solely on the plants to mate, and give birth to more pony/plant hybrids. Or, they eat everypony and they all die.
Or my personal favorite in a plant vore story: The plants 'store' the ponies inside them in a state of eternal stimulation, never releasing them, and feeding off their juices. Imagine a thousand years of orgasm denial... hopefully, the plant isn't that cruel.
2931249 I already brought that up on the first chapter,
2937426
Never hurts to say it again, especially when one can make a SBEmail reference at the same time.
Things are getting Zerg-ish up in here! Seriously though, my theory is that it digests them and absorbs their consciousnesses into itself, so they can take over Equestria as their new plant overlords.
2933983
I vote hybrids. It keeps the mane cast in the story as more active in the plant domination process. I like how each is having a unique plant species claim them for a (seemingly) more permanent bonding.
Though vore isn't really my thing, I don't mind it as a sort of ultimate submission.
I'm with Arzoo on the plants perminately bonding with the mane 6 making them something along the lines of plant/ponys summisive to the plants.
2937612 only if your not hurt by the author up infront telling you I know and don't care, and my editor can't handle it.