Twilight has heard rumors of a plant in the Everfree which resists magic. She decides to find and study this plant, and present the findings to Celestia. Unfortunately, the plant has other plans for her.
Somewhat disappointed we didn't get any details on how Dash was transformed. And it sounds like Luna is on her way to fun; hope there's a suitable fate awaiting her.
i can't help but be simultaneously disturbed and turned on by this story. i'm torn on who i want to win: the plants or the ponies that aren't enslaved. on the one hand, the plants are enslaving and brainwashing ponies, and then allowing ponies like dash to torture other ponies, which all the others seem to be fine with. on the other, they have really hot sex. it's anyponies game at this point.
Dust couldn’t even moan in complaint due to the vine invading her longs
1. Lungs.
Well, I actually expected it to be Celestia's turn already but then... denial. Just like those plants you little tease. First Luna for sure then Celestia... Now that I think about it, how did such a plant come about? Think Discord had anything to do with it?
Gods yes it updated! Heheh, leaves a couple things I hope to see. One, wonder what's gonna happen when it's Trixie's turn. And two, hope to see whatever happened to Spike. Still hoping he survived.
I've got a bit of a problem with what happens to Dust. Mainly, she will die within a few days maximum(even if the air supply didn't get removed) due to unable to obtain fluids, inability to sweat, and inability to excrete waste products. Since the air did get removed, she died from being asphyxiated within a few minutes. Before, I could attribute the ponies being able to survive because the plant was regulating things, but here, the plant has been removed. Thus, nothing is keeping Dust's vitals in check.
Plus, when did Rainbow turn into such a sadist? And how can Twilight agree with this? I thought Twilight was spreading the plant to make everyone feel good, but Rainbow's actions are doing the exact opposite.
Pretty erotic chapter, you got me wondering what's going to happen to Derpy flying around and eating the petals of each of the mane six's ponies.
Also, seeing Dust amber prison Bad End was pretty slick, you should write more endings for side ponies that the plant doesn't spare. I mean, Twilight said most ponies are consumed and only some are spared? Detail what happens in the former. Dabble around in describing a pony get trapped and watching in horror as their own skin uncurls into leaves and their blood turns to chlorophyll, their hooves turn into tentacles and their mouth and eye deform to become flowers... Then this new plant has to watch in horror as Gaia forces them to tentacle rape their former loved ones, turning them into plants as well. All of them slaves, ponies no more, turned into leaves and tentacles in order to further aid in the spreading root system that Gaia controls...
3514633 Dust's air was only disrupted for a moment. Also, all of the ponies have had their personalities vastly modified by the plants. Fluids are easy to come by, with the feeder tube in her, and her own waste heat could easily be managed by the circulation of cooled sap through the 'amber' gel.
The big problem, which Dash may not have noted, would be toxin buildup from not being able to urinate or defecate.
But yeah, the true colors of the plant faction are showing: it's all about spreading the plants, not making ponies feel good.
3514672 My bad, I missed the line about the tube still being there and Dash just unblocking it. I assumed she had completely removed it when I wrote that comment. Now this chapter isn't as bad as I thought it was.
3514724 Yeah, but she's still getting off way too much on the thought of tormenting Dust ruthlessly for, potentially, forever. These plants are nowhere near as benign as they first seemed.
On one hand, this is getting kinda doomsday-y, on the other, it would be funny it the entire pony population befriended the plant and lived in horny harmony.... FOREVER!
3514931 I imagine their plants will be searching for their "pony marks" and constantly messing up their attempts to capture a pony. As for Dust, well. . . I expect her to be a changed mare by the time Dash is through teasing and torturing her.
3514882 I think the plants are being pretty friendly about the whole 'world domination' thing.
3514770 Ponies for the Flower-Queen! Blood for the Root system! Celestia for the vitamin D!
3514728 By "job" do you mean "thorough tentacling"? If so, then yes.
3514725 Anyone who doesn't love this is either a eunuch or post-hysterectomy.
What? It's the truth! Sex is sexy, by definition!
3514633>>3514672 He hit on most of the points. The ponies have changed, and Gaia does want Dash to be happy. It helped Dash to trap a pony to keep her 'entertained' or perhaps distracted while spreading to more ponies.
Thanks to the magic of plants, they can regulate a pony's vitals, remove waste, and even communicate with Gaia (or Twilight, via Gaia.) So Dust will be fine, kept alive by the plant and ordered to torment her by Dash. Twilight could talk to Dust if she wanted too... but the plants don't need *everypony*. Ponies will get digested, or even killed if they stand in the way of the plants. It's either join us or die. Luckily for Dust (or unluckily) Dash wanted her alive, so she'll get to experience the New World Order™ from the safety of her cocoon. Maybe a million years from now, humans will unearth a perfectly preserved Pegasus.
3514360>>3514668 I like it. Digestion was the next plant related thing for me to explore, but the transformation or transfer of consciousness is perfect. Like, Cheerilee turned into a plant and forced to lure all her students to their deaths... because Gaia doesn't need anymore fillies.
Oh, and Derpy is Derpy. Through her general clutziness and ability to pollenate a large area of Ponyville, she might just survive this whole mess with only mild side effects like flower addiction.
3514389 Spike is chilling and being milked until the author Gaia figures out the best use for him.
Good idea. Trixie needs to be knocked down a peg. Perhaps even digested and fed through a tube to ponies like Dust or Spike, who need nutrients.
3514360 Probably, the plants are a relic of ancient times, when Discord ruled Equestria. The real question is: Did Discord reform, or is he going to sit back and laugh as the plants attempt to assimilate Celestia?
3514097 Yeah, someone made a point about how having endless orgasms would lead to scrambling their brains. Then again, they're endless orgasms... it's a tough call.
35139223513825 Plant sex is going to earn its own genre tag soon.
3513821 occassional? When would be raped by magical plants ever be a bad thing?
3513803 Right now, her talents will probably lie in encaspulating ponies and leaving them in stasis, similiar to how she was encased in a vine. I might also allow her to swallow ponies and regurgitate them to plants. There's endless possibilities.
Fluttershy's going to be like poison ivy, and Rarity/Apple Bloom are going to be like sirens. I think Applejack's love of strict bondage and vine-play reveals her new 'special talent'. What then will Pinky and Sweetie be good at?
3515126 "The power grid is down?" *hears giggling* "Sweet mother of God. . ." The scientist turns around slowly. Giggle at the ghostly "Crikey, what a brilliant shiela. Command, they've surrounded me." tickle up a human "Tell my wife, I love her." Pinkie flies out of the bushes, landing on the scientist and tickling him to death. Meanwhile. . .
Sgt. Johnson sits on a toilet taking a dump when suddenly, EXPLOSION! Chrysallis roars, looking down at him in disdain, before biting his head off.
Were I not turned on by thid, i'd suggest the princesses salt the earth around these plants, so they couldn't grow. But for now i'm rooting (lol) for the plants.
Well the plants need Celestia and Luna to be alive anyway. The sun and the moon helps them grow outside. You just have to think about a way to make Celestia and Luna like them :D Let Twilight handle the seducing part.
I'm a bit nervous about the upcoming digestion angle. I'm pretty picky about that sort of thing, I hope the victims get to be pleasured into it instead of just dissolved unceremoniously. Digestion by snu-snu? <3
Really enjoyed Lightning Dust's fate and her thoughts about it. Seeing as Rainbow has Dust and Fluttershy is keeping Big Mac, will the other girls get 'pets' of their own? Maybe keeping Trixie as Twilight's personal maid and 'entertainment', or getting Flim and Flam to serve on Applejack's farm.
As much as I'm looking forward to seeing Gaia have fun with the princesses though, I hope Luna doesn't get captured too soon, or at least manage to escape after some brief sexy times. There are still a lot of other ponies to catch, and towns to take over.
Also, seeing as the plants can evolve new abilities from other plants, I wonder if they can adapt technologies as well. Using Vinyl's wubs to make vibrating tentacles would be... interesting.
3515053 Well, for Spike, you could have him work as a messenger. Gaia can communicate with just about anypony in Ponyville, but the plants and ponies in other cities are far away and not (yet) connected by root system to Gaia, so they may need some help coordinating and receiving orders.
Alternatively, you could take advantage of the whole 'dragon emotions affect growth' thing and turn him into a weapon. The plants are dangerous and magic-proof, but as some commenters noted earlier, they still aren't invulnerable against a clever opponent or a creature that isn't as magic dependent as ponies are. The plant-ponies themselves are a lot stronger, but are still ponies.
Also, I just realized that if/when Luna gets caught, she could use dreams to spread propaganda and sexual torment throughout Equestria. NOPONY IS SAFE!
... WHAT?!? No, no, what? What the fuck am I reading here? Where did Dash come from? Why did she do that to Lightening Dust? The beginning made it seem like they were on... Okay terms, not sexual torment and kidnapping terms! What the fuck!?!
She might be frozen here, forever denied orgasm, until she died.
I do enjoy multiple orgasms, however, orgasm denial is just as fun. Leaving her there, at the precipice, but never quite falling over the edge. Her begging, pleading desperately for release... but it never arrives. Her writhing there, going mad with torturous pleasure that never quite gets her there... And then, finally, when she cannot take it any longer... you stop, leaving her wanting, empty, weeping, and desperate for your touch...
...
...Sorry, I sort of lost my train of thought there. What was I talking about? Oh, yes, mistakes.
Before long, she felt an incredibly fullness and pressure in her gut.
"Incredibly" should just be "incredible."
It felt like she had been flying all day long and needed to use the restroom, but couldn’t until she landed.
I would think that this is a common problem for Pegasi, and I wonder how many young Pegasi just said, "screw it," and crapped while flying. Or, how many Pegasi crapped while flying to prank other Pegasi or Earth ponies. I assume they would only prank unicorns once after finding out that unicorns could just teleport the Pegasi's crap down the Pegasi's throat.
Being impregnated by the plant with Sweetie Belle was the most amazing thing Scootaloo had ever felt, and now it was her special talent!
This is simultaneously the funniest and saddest thing that I have read in this story.
I love how nonchalantly Fluttershy is speaking at the end of the chapter. You should have took Big Macintosh's blinders off at the big moment so he could see what he was doing to his little sister's best friend. Then the shame of what he was doing would have turned him on more, shaming him even more, further turning him on. You have every Ponyville pony member of the Apple family doing something for, or with, the plants, save one. Do you have plans for Granny Smith? *BONER KILLER* Awesome show, great job. As a reward, a Fluttershy aheao.
3510784
Yes. You win a prize for spotting that: A new chapter!
3504525
Thank you, I will do exactly that. Erotica, full steam ahead!
dude... you get drunk, then have GOOD ideas... teach me your secrets oh great one
3513705
Actually, I only wrote the first few chapters drunk. Since then, I've been 100%
soberhorny when writing them.Woah. That's fuck.
Wow, this is AMAZING!!!
3513670
The best kind of prize.
Somewhat disappointed we didn't get any details on how Dash was transformed. And it sounds like Luna is on her way to fun; hope there's a suitable fate awaiting her.
3513714 good. Writing this while horny will produce much more... Interesting results.
Wow, hard to believe season 4 is so close already.
Nice.
Damn me and my occasional tentacle fantasy...
My God... Season 4 will make this canon, though just a little. I can see it now... the plants fucking all the ponies.
Goooood
Gust this is AU world and I think with the plants yiffing them. They have to change the name Equestria to Planttria
i can't help but be simultaneously disturbed and turned on by this story. i'm torn on who i want to win: the plants or the ponies that aren't enslaved. on the one hand, the plants are enslaving and brainwashing ponies, and then allowing ponies like dash to torture other ponies, which all the others seem to be fine with. on the other, they have really hot sex. it's anyponies game at this point.
Dust couldn’t even moan in complaint due to the vine invading her longs
1. Lungs.
Well, I actually expected it to be Celestia's turn already but then... denial. Just like those plants you little tease. First Luna for sure then Celestia... Now that I think about it, how did such a plant come about? Think Discord had anything to do with it?
Gods yes it updated! Heheh, leaves a couple things I hope to see. One, wonder what's gonna happen when it's Trixie's turn. And two, hope to see whatever happened to Spike. Still hoping he survived.
O_O EWW
I've got a bit of a problem with what happens to Dust. Mainly, she will die within a few days maximum(even if the air supply didn't get removed) due to unable to obtain fluids, inability to sweat, and inability to excrete waste products. Since the air did get removed, she died from being asphyxiated within a few minutes. Before, I could attribute the ponies being able to survive because the plant was regulating things, but here, the plant has been removed. Thus, nothing is keeping Dust's vitals in check.
Plus, when did Rainbow turn into such a sadist? And how can Twilight agree with this? I thought Twilight was spreading the plant to make everyone feel good, but Rainbow's actions are doing the exact opposite.
Pretty erotic chapter, you got me wondering what's going to happen to Derpy flying around and eating the petals of each of the mane six's ponies.
Also, seeing Dust amber prison Bad End was pretty slick, you should write more endings for side ponies that the plant doesn't spare. I mean, Twilight said most ponies are consumed and only some are spared? Detail what happens in the former. Dabble around in describing a pony get trapped and watching in horror as their own skin uncurls into leaves and their blood turns to chlorophyll, their hooves turn into tentacles and their mouth and eye deform to become flowers... Then this new plant has to watch in horror as Gaia forces them to tentacle rape their former loved ones, turning them into plants as well. All of them slaves, ponies no more, turned into leaves and tentacles in order to further aid in the spreading root system that Gaia controls...
I should probably go to bed.
3514633
Dust's air was only disrupted for a moment. Also, all of the ponies have had their personalities vastly modified by the plants.
Fluids are easy to come by, with the feeder tube in her, and her own waste heat could easily be managed by the circulation of cooled sap through the 'amber' gel.
The big problem, which Dash may not have noted, would be toxin buildup from not being able to urinate or defecate.
But yeah, the true colors of the plant faction are showing: it's all about spreading the plants, not making ponies feel good.
3514672 My bad, I missed the line about the tube still being there and Dash just unblocking it. I assumed she had completely removed it when I wrote that comment. Now this chapter isn't as bad as I thought it was.
My God, this is so fucked up... why do I love it so much?
I do hope that you will give Luna a decent job.
3514724
Yeah, but she's still getting off way too much on the thought of tormenting Dust ruthlessly for, potentially, forever.
These plants are nowhere near as benign as they first seemed.
Eeyup, still loving it. For the Flora!
On one hand, this is getting kinda doomsday-y, on the other, it would be funny it the entire pony population befriended the plant and lived in horny harmony.... FOREVER!
I can't wait to see what the Crusader's plants will be like and what'll happen to Lightning Dust
3514931
I imagine their plants will be searching for their "pony marks" and constantly messing up their attempts to capture a pony. As for Dust, well. . . I expect her to be a changed mare by the time Dash is through teasing and torturing her.
3514882
I think the plants are being pretty friendly about the whole 'world domination' thing.
3514770
Ponies for the Flower-Queen!
Blood for the Root system!
Celestia for the vitamin D!
3514728
By "job" do you mean "thorough tentacling"? If so, then yes.
3514725
Anyone who doesn't love this is either a eunuch or post-hysterectomy.
What? It's the truth! Sex is sexy, by definition!
3514633>>3514672
He hit on most of the points. The ponies have changed, and Gaia does want Dash to be happy. It helped Dash to trap a pony to keep her 'entertained' or perhaps distracted while spreading to more ponies.
Thanks to the magic of plants, they can regulate a pony's vitals, remove waste, and even communicate with Gaia (or Twilight, via Gaia.) So Dust will be fine, kept alive by the plant and ordered to torment her by Dash. Twilight could talk to Dust if she wanted too... but the plants don't need *everypony*. Ponies will get digested, or even killed if they stand in the way of the plants. It's either join us or die. Luckily for Dust (or unluckily) Dash wanted her alive, so she'll get to experience the New World Order™ from the safety of her cocoon. Maybe a million years from now, humans will unearth a perfectly preserved Pegasus.
3514360>>3514668
I like it. Digestion was the next plant related thing for me to explore, but the transformation or transfer of consciousness is perfect. Like, Cheerilee turned into a plant and forced to lure all her students to their deaths... because Gaia doesn't need anymore fillies.
Oh, and Derpy is Derpy. Through her general clutziness and ability to pollenate a large area of Ponyville, she might just survive this whole mess with only mild side effects like flower addiction.
3514389
Spike is chilling and being milked until
the authorGaia figures out the best use for him.Good idea. Trixie needs to be knocked down a peg. Perhaps even digested and fed through a tube to ponies like Dust or Spike, who need nutrients.
3514360
Probably, the plants are a relic of ancient times, when Discord ruled Equestria. The real question is: Did Discord reform, or is he going to sit back and laugh as the plants attempt to assimilate Celestia?
3514097
Yeah, someone made a point about how having endless orgasms would lead to scrambling their brains. Then again, they're endless orgasms... it's a tough call.
3513922 3513825
Plant sex is going to earn its own genre tag soon.
3513821
occassional? When would be raped by magical plants ever be a bad thing?
3513803
Right now, her talents will probably lie in encaspulating ponies and leaving them in stasis, similiar to how she was encased in a vine. I might also allow her to swallow ponies and regurgitate them to plants. There's endless possibilities.
Fluttershy's going to be like poison ivy, and Rarity/Apple Bloom are going to be like sirens. I think Applejack's love of strict bondage and vine-play reveals her new 'special talent'. What then will Pinky and Sweetie be good at?
3513721
Plan A: abstinence.
Plan B: Kill the baby.
3515036
And then, using the DNA in that Pegasus, a crazy scientist recreates the ponies with genetic engineering, placing them on an island.
Naturally it ends with special effects and eccentric billionaires making stupid decisions.
3515126
"The power grid is down?"
*hears giggling*
"Sweet mother of God. . ." The scientist turns around slowly.
Giggle at the ghostly
"Crikey, what a brilliant shiela. Command, they've surrounded me."
tickle up a human
"Tell my wife, I love her."
Pinkie flies out of the bushes, landing on the scientist and tickling him to death. Meanwhile. . .
Sgt. Johnson sits on a toilet taking a dump when suddenly, EXPLOSION! Chrysallis roars, looking down at him in disdain, before biting his head off.
Yep, I approve of this sequel idea.
Were I not turned on by thid, i'd suggest the princesses salt the earth around these plants, so they couldn't grow. But for now i'm rooting (lol) for the plants.
Well the plants need Celestia and Luna to be alive anyway.
The sun and the moon helps them grow outside.
You just have to think about a way to make Celestia and Luna like them :D
Let Twilight handle the seducing part.
okay okay okay
I'm gunna be real with you.
I really like this story.
but I cant think of anything original, or clever, or playful to communicate this fact.
so here is a generally positive emotocon
and have a great day
Expect updates more often than never.
Hmmm... so does that mean daily?
3516148
Daily is technically more often than never... but so is yearly.
Luckily, I'm bored, and when I'm bored, I write pony.
3516169 Well then, get bored more often!
I'm a bit nervous about the upcoming digestion angle. I'm pretty picky about that sort of thing, I hope the victims get to be pleasured into it instead of just dissolved unceremoniously. Digestion by snu-snu? <3
Really enjoyed Lightning Dust's fate and her thoughts about it. Seeing as Rainbow has Dust and Fluttershy is keeping Big Mac, will the other girls get 'pets' of their own? Maybe keeping Trixie as Twilight's personal maid and 'entertainment', or getting Flim and Flam to serve on Applejack's farm.
As much as I'm looking forward to seeing Gaia have fun with the princesses though, I hope Luna doesn't get captured too soon, or at least manage to escape after some brief sexy times. There are still a lot of other ponies to catch, and towns to take over.
Also, seeing as the plants can evolve new abilities from other plants, I wonder if they can adapt technologies as well. Using Vinyl's wubs to make vibrating tentacles would be... interesting.
I keep forgetting how dark this story gets.
Ahhahahahaha! This story is brilliant! Keep up the good work man, I was smiling the whole way through.
Wut da fuq is dis.
Dis shit b kinky.
3515053 Well, for Spike, you could have him work as a messenger. Gaia can communicate with just about anypony in Ponyville, but the plants and ponies in other cities are far away and not (yet) connected by root system to Gaia, so they may need some help coordinating and receiving orders.
Alternatively, you could take advantage of the whole 'dragon emotions affect growth' thing and turn him into a weapon. The plants are dangerous and magic-proof, but as some commenters noted earlier, they still aren't invulnerable against a clever opponent or a creature that isn't as magic dependent as ponies are. The plant-ponies themselves are a lot stronger, but are still ponies.
Also, I just realized that if/when Luna gets caught, she could use dreams to spread propaganda and sexual torment throughout Equestria. NOPONY IS SAFE!
This story is officially canon now.
And it also became your most-viewed story over night. Congratulations.
Heh, all those views this week.
Amaing Work cant wait for more
... WHAT?!? No, no, what? What the fuck am I reading here? Where did Dash come from? Why did she do that to Lightening Dust? The beginning made it seem like they were on... Okay terms, not sexual torment and kidnapping terms! What the fuck!?!
I do enjoy multiple orgasms, however, orgasm denial is just as fun. Leaving her there, at the precipice, but never quite falling over the edge. Her begging, pleading desperately for release... but it never arrives. Her writhing there, going mad with torturous pleasure that never quite gets her there... And then, finally, when she cannot take it any longer... you stop, leaving her wanting, empty, weeping, and desperate for your touch...
...
...Sorry, I sort of lost my train of thought there. What was I talking about? Oh, yes, mistakes.
"Incredibly" should just be "incredible."
I would think that this is a common problem for Pegasi, and I wonder how many young Pegasi just said, "screw it," and crapped while flying. Or, how many Pegasi crapped while flying to prank other Pegasi or Earth ponies. I assume they would only prank unicorns once after finding out that unicorns could just teleport the Pegasi's crap down the Pegasi's throat.
This is simultaneously the funniest and saddest thing that I have read in this story.
I love how nonchalantly Fluttershy is speaking at the end of the chapter. You should have took Big Macintosh's blinders off at the big moment so he could see what he was doing to his little sister's best friend. Then the shame of what he was doing would have turned him on more, shaming him even more, further turning him on. You have every Ponyville pony member of the Apple family doing something for, or with, the plants, save one. Do you have plans for Granny Smith? *BONER KILLER* Awesome show, great job. As a reward, a Fluttershy aheao.
3552209 Psh, 'Pegasi'. Obviously the correct term is Pegasususuuususuusususususus.
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