Twilight has heard rumors of a plant in the Everfree which resists magic. She decides to find and study this plant, and present the findings to Celestia. Unfortunately, the plant has other plans for her.
4341974 If it was a non-clop fic, I would read it, probably quicker too due to lack of guilt, despite me skipping over some of the weirder parts in the current clop version.
''shattering the bones and grinding the tissue to a bloody pulp''... More of that ''poop'' ? Seriously, what the fuck happened to the author ? WHAT happened to this story ? Got an extra heavy-duty shot of gore in your drink, after Chapter 9 ?
I'm disappointed greatly and would recommend people to stop reading this story after Chapter 9. The original spirit isn't there anymore. The initial interest AND purpose of this story, and the quality standard, fell and failed after that point, and the author will not likely budge from this terribly negative way.
that was epic
She then whipped a fine forward, lassoing a pegasus
She spit out some blood as she got to her hooves and faced him
began to levitate, as if magnetize
1. Vine.
2. Spat.
3. Magnetised. (The S and Z are just preference between Brits and Mareicans)
I BURN!!!
yay! fire always wins!
you got a problem? BURN DOWN ITS HOUSE!!!
This became quite the epic showdown for what started as a clopfic
When was she at war with her? The whole batle lasted like 5 minutes before she banished her in the moon
This should be "vine."
This should have a d at the end.
This was pretty good. It is too bad you did not go for the "Twilight rules over all and Celestia is her sex slave" ending, though.
KBO.
4341974 If it was a non-clop fic, I would read it, probably quicker too due to lack of guilt, despite me skipping over some of the weirder parts in the current clop version.
Oh, and the glorious power of that lucky old Sun descends upon Equestria. static-3.nexusmods.com/15/mods/130/images/40322-1-1298015368.gif
''shattering the bones and grinding the tissue to a bloody pulp''... More of that ''poop'' ? Seriously, what the fuck happened to the author ?
WHAT happened to this story ? Got an extra heavy-duty shot of gore in your drink, after Chapter 9 ?
I'm disappointed greatly and would recommend people to stop reading this story after Chapter 9. The original spirit isn't there anymore.
The initial interest AND purpose of this story, and the quality standard, fell and failed after that point, and the author will not likely budge from this terribly negative way.
-In gore and confusion great stories go to die.
Epic fight.
At least Celestia didn't glass the whole planet.
...that was a pretty good fight scene.
Though if this were a true boss battle there would be way more vines and way more exploding fires.
Good job though. Just throw the she at it. Works every time....
BURN IT DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!