FIRST!

You sick bastard! How dare you write something like this . . .
Then again, I'm the one who read it . . .
*thinks*
*thinks*
*thinks*
*Thinker position*
Damn.
Nice job, by the way,

Well-written

Bravo you sick b@sterd, nice job.

You are really good at writing clopfics... why is Fluttershy so attractive?

You sir are a great writer..thx for this story...i love it

Yay! it's hard to find a fluttershy/Rarity fic! I love it.

Pink suits you fluttershy..

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I took your words and converted them into motivation. Thank you.

Whenever i read one of these i take a shower.............i didn't this time 0.o

Need a quagmire pony!

252110 Giggity Giggity Giggity!

You have quite an impressive vocabulary! Loved it.

I, too, note a distinct lack of Rarishy/Flarity around here. And that's terrible. I am so very glad when something like this comes along to remedy that. Good show, sir.

i dont get it why do people assume rarity likes to do wierd stuff like dress up, in leather ans such, hmmm.

I surely will go to hell for reading this, but I think that this may have been worth it. And besides, I hear hell is like Hotel California

compiling into puddles
What did the English language ever do to you, that you would savagely beat it with a thesaurus?

(to be clear, I liked your story. It was only that it's not only purple prose, but purple prose with some quite bizarre turns of phrase.)

"She didn't say the outfits were dresses."

Haha, hahahahaha, HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

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Silly tilkau, don't you know the thesaurus is the preferred murder weapon of any fanfic author?

502163 Because she would make a very sexy dom. That is why.
245369 Wonderful fic, though. That end sentence was win, btw, total win.

Best ever

Ever so demurely, she stole a glance at Rarity's covered rump and turned straight again,

I read this as Fluttershy looking at Rarity and being turned straight, as in never being attracted to mares again.

Nice story, lol, that ending though, I also like your name!