A changeling nymph is accepted to go into deep cover in the town of Ponyville. However, what exactly are her motivations for requesting this assignment? Is it for the hive? Or is it for herself?
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Pure awesomeness.
still waiting for the part with twilight :)
YES!!! FINALLY POPPED THE QUESTION!!
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Ditto
its about time! I've been waiting for Rhino to propose for like... 58 damn chapters!
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Yeah, we all know its coming, don't know when. Because once twilight discovers who they are, they will need to go public and ensure everypony of their true intentions, nothing sinister. Either that or they get kicked out of ponyville and exiled, and Rhino gets punished for treason(correct term? idk). whichever way the story plays out... I can only see there being at least 10 chapters left in this story... RHINO YOU'D BETTER WRITE US A SEQUEL ONCE THIS STORY IS DONE!
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What?
I think you're forgetting about one important thing.
Chrysalis is going to be less than happy to find out that she's gone from having a strong force to losing four of her best assets. Three of which she lost by way of defection. If she doesn't try to take a shot at Equestria for that, I'll be more than a little surprised.
Seems Legit.
Yes took a while butts where kicked and it came out good in they end.
Just a thought on should there be some sort of... misdirection on the wedding day..., (and whew, it's finally good to come back and read this fic again. IRL stuff hurts.)
Rhino and Gel, "Let's get married!"
Twilight, "Nopenopenopenopenopenopenopenopenope."
Changeling Hive Commanders, "Nonononononononononono."
Drone 273, "Hi I'm an ambiguous character off to ruin your special day "
Rest of the Hive, "US TOO!"
Let's hope Rhino and Gel's speech and persuasion skills are maxed for this one
someone should make a comic of this
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If someone did, that would be amazing.
Yay! Happiness and sunshine... Three changelings for Twilight to freak out over...... Well, their f%{ed
Sweetness, plot moving forward, and THREE changelings hiding from changeling detectors.
And the story isn't even over yet.
You tug my feels too well. The more I read the more addicted I get...and considering I had to set a timer to force myself to look away and spend some time on my Calculus course work, that could be a self-destructive addiction...but it's worth the high.
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You have helped make my life enjoyable. I owe you a debt of massive proportions. Thank you for writing, and expect more prostrate, abject gratitude from yours truly.
All the corny reference in the previous few chapters have been forgiven after that completely cliché, super sappy but still so incredibly heart warming proposal.
well the rescue mission arc is over and i would like to say it was awesome
.I loved this chapter so much I'm so happy Rhino finely proposed to Gel and she said yes.And that Silk is ok with Gel being a changeling she is such a sweet and awesome friend.again I hope she finds her own love hopefully Flick.And that Luster finds a stallion as good as Rhino for her.I can't wait to see what happens between them all next and what happens to them all next.
The question was asked, eeeeeeeeeeeee~
And the household grows!
Cya
Raziel-chan
best line ever
ok... now im sad again. only been reading this story for about
5-7 hors total and im this far in. only a few hours more and its finished. its rare for me to find such a good story i literaly read it in my sleep!!!
so, gratz to the author for pushing me to bend the human phyc to a point its in 6 dimentions!!! lmfao! tho there are plenty of spelling errors, this is story i will read a few times, and i never read one more than once.
and as for the errors: some of the best things in the world have a lot of flaws, it only adds to there charm!
A nice finale to the Gel Retrieval Arc, can't wait for the next episode of
An Arutaanato Pasu Z. :V
/Joke
Someone should show Luster the Halo Theme. She'd love playing it.