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All of his life, Close Call has only ever known the grey, steel walls of Stable 81. That is, until an alternate path is laid out for him: an enigmatic research expedition into the outside world to learn just what has happened to everypony else. What he'll find, he does not know. Civilization? Death? War? There is only one way to be certain, and Close Call may find there are more questions than answers in the Equestrian Wasteland.

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looks good so far keep writing

I like it! :pinkiehappy:

Really hope he doesn't die but Sunny deserves what she gets.

Well it looks like the Goddess wants something from them and hopefully it's not Close Call but it's probably Sunny. Good chapter again :yay:

This looks interesting, I think I'll add it to my read list. In the meantime, have my thumbs up in advance.

Did you make that cover art? Cause I like it.:pinkiesmile:

Thanks everypony!

I did not, in fact, draw the cover art-a friend of mine did it as a favor to me! This friend, to be exact: http://got2lovethatfire.deviantart.com/

Oh, good! :pinkiehappy: But using of mane6 statues in fic is not good idea. Not like I really give a fuck, but it is simply not.. better way. :ajsmug:

Using the statuettes was a decision I debated for quite some time; however at this time, I figure that I've already used two of them, so I may as well be in for all seven. Thanks for the advice though!

I'll bet you the visitor is from his Stable, good chapter again :yay:

Good chapter serdadu :pinkiesmile:

I'm not good at feedback but I can assure you your work is well.

Good chapter! :pinkiehappy: Can't believe it took me so fuckin long to read. :ajsleepy:
I hope he will return in stable one day. I love when protagonist returning in stable and suddenly looks like a boss. :coolphoto:

I'm glad everypony's enjoying it! Tell your friends, spread the word! :D

Comment posted by ZIAT deleted Nov 10th, 2014

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If you mean as to why I included him, I felt it necessary due to Close Call's situation. As far as I can tell, Watcher keeps a close eye on stable ponies who he thinks could be an element of harmony. As of now, he's probably concentrated his gaze elsewhere, seeing that Close's aims are more personal rather than for the good of the wasteland; like Littlepip or Blackjack.

Oh, I finally catched up with this!:pinkiehappy:
Great chapta! We gonna have some romance line in story now? :twilightsheepish:
Cant wait to see this twins. Keep writing it.:twilightsmile:

I think this story is massively, MASSIVELY too unnoticed. I'm almost ready to say that the people's ignorance regarding this story is barbaric and shameful. Why aren't you getting more views?! :fluttercry:

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