this is the story of how all the ponies went insane such as pinkamena or dash and the rainbow factory if your into gore and devious things look no further than here this is our first story so may not be good
this is the story of how all the ponies went insane such as pinkamena or dash and the rainbow factory if your into gore and devious things look no further than here this is our first story so may not be good
3 is my lucky number!
2819795 ok then lol
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What's your lucky number?
2819829 13 and 16
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Ok then.
1 plus 6 is 7.
I'm high.
2819846 ok then
I like it so far!
One quick thing: the title should be spelled "syndrome", and this chapter should be spelled "prologue"
Nice work!
This story doesn't have "Fire Bird syndrome". I have "firebird syndrome". It means making you're self out being a bad writer when you're actually slightly above average.
2821642 um? its not there yet plus its just a way of naming what me and my gf are naming it are you just saying this just cause your name is firebird were not on here alot so if we have the same name in the title sorry but still its a diffrent story so let off
2820647 thanks sorry me and my gf didn't know how to spell that will fix asap
2821910 I was joking.
2821918 ok then sorry just you know our first published work
2821924 I know.
This is pretty dark!
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Thank you! Me and Pheonix appreciate your feedback! Share with you're friends if they like this weird creepy type stuff! Oh and we are working on chapter 4 so be prepared!!!!
Are you ever going to release the next one?
Them cliffhangers just kill me