A lonely earthpony is browsing Twilight Sparkle's personal library for a solution to his sex life when he stumbles upon a book of Twilight's that expect to find.
Just a short little story that's an expansion of a monthly challenge.
A lonely earthpony is browsing Twilight Sparkle's personal library for a solution to his sex life when he stumbles upon a book of Twilight's that expect to find.
Just a short little story that's an expansion of a monthly challenge.
um... I don't get it. =/
Why is it complete?:( there's something missing
When you make a protagonist seem like a scumbag in his thoughts, it makes everyone else's actions against him seem justified! I love the story, and if anyone decides to file a report to the police against him. I will remember to slip the witness a twenty.
... That's it?
Are you sure that this is complete?
There are a few spelling errors too, and the paragraphs could use some spacing. It's not a bad story, it's just... incomplete. Who is the narrator? Male? Female? Somepony we should know?
What I think the other comments are saying is exciting secret book of twilight
-gets to reading it-
-BLANK! NO INFOMATION!-
Twilight kindly asks you to sod off.
Seriously apparently the book has a lot of pages and no information from the book to (us) the reader? Exciting then anti climax ending.