A normal day of saving Ponyville leads Twilight to cast the most powerful spell she's ever created. But something goes wrong. Not with her magic, but with the world as a whole. Now Twilight is in a strange place, similar and yet different. Given the chance to learn the truth about her friends, her teacher, her home, and herself...
And what it boils down to will be possibly the hardest question she's ever faced.
Authors Note: Still getting used to writing Fics, please message me about mistakes, it's the only way I'll learn. All I ask is you be generous about it and not rude. Thank you.
Also, characters listed may be subject to change. The mane six will definitely be involved at some point, but the story's focus will be on Twilight and everyone she knows for the most part.
Alright, I only have two qualms about this story; for one, you have a few grammatical errors that you really should fix. Two, at one or two points I felt that the story was somewhat predictable.
Beyond that though? I'm liking how this is shaping up to be. It's well written next to the few errors I've mentioned, it's quite the original idea so far, all of the canon characters seem to be in character, and the end of the first chapter had me desiring an answer. You do suspense quite well, I think. Just fix up the other errors I've mentioned and you should be fine.
Keep up the good work.
I'm such a sucker for this kind of story, I just can't help myself. I'm really looking forward to seeing how this scenario unfolds.
*Gestures you to shoo*
Well, go on now! Write another chapter.
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Sorry, schoolwork has been tying me up. Lots of big projects this semester. If I can find time I will continue this. Perhaps I might even rewrite these chapters as they look way to skimpy with not enough time to develop characters and settings. But I assure you this story isn't dead. It's just slow going as life gets in the way.
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Ah, I see.
Well, I'm overjoyed to hear it isn't dead! I feared it was
The chapters looked fine to me, a few grammar issues here and there, but then again, I'm a horrible story writer, don't take it from me.
The fun has been doubled! Huzzah!