Set in the early ages of Princess Celestia and Luna's reign, where Discord still lurks around from the distance. An alicorn named Harmony views her life pointless. But her father thinks that she will get better if she takes lessons from the princesses themselves, and he can make this happen due to their wealth. Harmony then is sent there to work with her teachers and finds one of them fighting with a stranger one day. When the stranger comes back another day while the princesses are out, the stranger places a curse on her that makes her see the world differently. Her almost dead frozen heart starts to beat again as she learns the true meaning of being in harmony. But there's more to come when people start to like her again that makes her throw it all away.
Also, crime, arranged marriage, and learning to let the past go. I think this may turn out to be an ok first story. Hope you enjoy. And credit for the design of picture to horses27 from devianart.com.
I'd recommend against outright describing any characters. Doesn't flow well, ya know? Rather it breaks up the flow, thusly taking away from the story. Try sprinkling in description here and there instead.
I have no clue why the downvotes. It seems to have lots of potential. Can't wait to see more!
2799376 Ermergerd! Sorry I'm just do excited because these downvotes have been making me sad and when you write something for the first time, all you really need is a nice person to keep you floating, so thank you.