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Newman2007


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Four hundred years later is the beginning of the end. Twilight is now in command with her daughter, Aure. After Twilight goes missing, Aure refuses to talk to anyone about her feelings, not even the most trusted royal advisor, Skyfall. When the Twilight returns, she is banged up and bruised and not to mention that her distant memories of her secret come back to haunt her. Will Twilight recover and save Equestria from its threatening fate?

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 13 )

2647570 I am almost done with chapter two so that should be out in the next couple of hours.

Comment posted by Newman2007 deleted Jun 6th, 2013

2709572 nope; something more evil than anything created so far, but you have to wait and see what comes next! I'm working on Chapter 4 right now, but it will be a long one. :twilightsmile:

Word usage needs a little work, there are a few cases where I fan tell what you meant but the actual wording is incorrect.

2764497 actually I was wondering if you would want to be my first editor?

Don't know if this story is died but I faved it anyway.

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