The Cutie Mark Crusaders decide it could be fun to write a Detective story, but lacking inspiration for a protagonist, they decide to include the awesomest pony they can think of.
Extra special thanks to my Sister/Beta Reader, Phoebe.
Inspired by tygerbug's "Pony Noir", image used with permission.
Why do I get the feeling that this story reminds me of an episode of Family Matters....
Still, a nice idea and i wish to encourage you to keep up the good work upon such an interesting idea like this one.
Curse those cliff hangers.
Ok Shaki you have me interested and I'm liking it so far. Unfortunately now I have to wait impatiently for the next chapter.
And I like Russian Fluttershy.
DAMN U GOTTA DO MOAAAAAAAAAARRR!!!!!!!!!!!
PLS DON'T MAKE THIS ANOTHER STORY LONG FORGOTTEN
I repeat...
MOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
388948 Striker, I am nagging my pre-reader as I type
sladkiĭ an update.
Come on Sweetie Belle, the term "partners" doesn't always mean that type.
I swear it is too easy giving her a "Stalliongradian" accent.
I wonder how those hoofcuffs stay on. Odd question I know but it's the small things that bugs me.
Aaaaanywho Shaki, CMC parts done? See somepony does care about the "general update" blog post.
And FYI I didn't see that blog post since I wasn't actually watching you. I have rectified the problem.
390906 It always means that type. Always. Made for a rather interesting playthrough of L.A. Noire...
Da! Fluttershy is best Russian!
As far as I can tell, pony legs seem to be slightly wider at the hoof than the rest of the leg, so they could probably stay on... and if not, then a unicorn did it
Hooray for general update caring! And hooray for watching!
Narrator: An update has occurred...
WEE!!!
YEEHAH!!!
ALL RIGHT!!!
YES!!!
WELL DONE!!!
Yay...
Oh sweet Celestia, Sinatra? REALLY?!
*Reads first line* Is that...? *Reads further* It is! You brought in Sinatra! That just made my day.
as mayor, good lord. But I am confused, is the name mint bullet or rainbow dash? Also, can you write about the reactions of the pony's names being used in the story. would sure get a kick of being a mayor.
So, if Pinkie Pie was a private, she would be PPP and if she were that and party planner she would be PPPPP, or PPPPPP if it was a private party? OW! My poor brain doesn't need this kind of abuse.
Ah Sinatra, Fly me to the moon and Swinging on a Star 'nuff said.
Sweet Celestia did you really have to make...HER... mayor?
You’d to well do get out of my office before I lose my Celestia Banished temper.” * I ask you to read this sentence. When you hear it...
e621.net/data/ea/c0/eac0ee662a455766c7e8a5bcdde73924.png?1323605893 Just remove the cane and chain.
455972 I hope that's a good "REALLY?!" rather than a bad "REALLY?!"
456000 Instant awesome, just add Sinatra
I mean Blue Eyes
457426 Sorry for the confusion! Mint Bullet is the protagonist of a book series that Rarity reads. A quote from one of his books heads each chapter.
Rainbow Dash is the protagonist of the book written by the CMC.
As for reactions... That would be spoliers
460951 Now you see how she gets donations so easily!
Sorry, cane and chain? I'm not sure I follow...
461258
Is the picture not showing up? It's a picture of Spike wearing a white suit, white fedora and gold chain. He's also holding a cane, so remove the chain and cane and there you have your description of spike in your story. Roughly
461221 A good REALLY?!
461468 Phew! I was worried in case this broke the first rule of fanfic-ing: Never write a song-fic
Moar