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Shakibone


I'm an amateur film maker, though I have tried my hand several times at writing.

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The Cutie Mark Crusaders decide it could be fun to write a Detective story, but lacking inspiration for a protagonist, they decide to include the awesomest pony they can think of.

Extra special thanks to my Sister/Beta Reader, Phoebe.
Inspired by tygerbug's "Pony Noir", image used with permission.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 20 )

Why do I get the feeling that this story reminds me of an episode of Family Matters....:rainbowhuh:

Still, a nice idea and i wish to encourage you to keep up the good work upon such an interesting idea like this one.:yay:

Curse those cliff hangers.
Ok Shaki you have me interested and I'm liking it so far. Unfortunately now I have to wait impatiently for the next chapter.
And I like Russian Fluttershy.

DAMN U GOTTA DO MOAAAAAAAAAARRR!!!!!!!!!!! :flutterrage:
PLS DON'T MAKE THIS ANOTHER STORY LONG FORGOTTEN :twilightoops:

I repeat...:fluttershysad:
MOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

388948 Striker, I am nagging my pre-reader as I type :twilightblush:

sladkiĭ an update. :yay:
Come on Sweetie Belle, the term "partners" doesn't always mean that type.
I swear it is too easy giving her a "Stalliongradian" accent.
I wonder how those hoofcuffs stay on. Odd question I know but it's the small things that bugs me.
Aaaaanywho Shaki, CMC parts done? See somepony does care about the "general update" blog post. :pinkiesmile:
And FYI I didn't see that blog post since I wasn't actually watching you. I have rectified the problem.

390906 It always means that type. Always. Made for a rather interesting playthrough of L.A. Noire...
:yay: Da! Fluttershy is best Russian!
As far as I can tell, pony legs seem to be slightly wider at the hoof than the rest of the leg, so they could probably stay on... and if not, then a unicorn did it :twilightsheepish:
Hooray for general update caring! And hooray for watching! :pinkiehappy:

Narrator: An update has occurred...
WEE!!!:pinkiehappy:
YEEHAH!!!:ajsmug:
ALL RIGHT!!!:rainbowwild:
YES!!!:raritywink:
WELL DONE!!!:twilightblush:
Yay...:yay:

Oh sweet Celestia, Sinatra? REALLY?!

*Reads first line* Is that...? :rainbowhuh: *Reads further* It is! :pinkiegasp: You brought in Sinatra! That just made my day.

:trixieshiftright: as mayor, good lord. But I am confused, is the name mint bullet or rainbow dash? Also, can you write about the reactions of the pony's names being used in the story. :trixieshiftleft: would sure get a kick of being a mayor.

So, if Pinkie Pie was a private, she would be PPP and if she were that and party planner she would be PPPPP, or PPPPPP if it was a private party? :derpyderp1: :derpyderp2: :derpytongue2:OW! My poor brain doesn't need this kind of abuse.
Ah Sinatra, Fly me to the moon and Swinging on a Star 'nuff said.
Sweet Celestia did you really have to make...HER... mayor?
You’d to well do get out of my office before I lose my Celestia Banished temper.” * I ask you to read this sentence. When you hear it... :facehoof:
e621.net/data/ea/c0/eac0ee662a455766c7e8a5bcdde73924.png?1323605893 Just remove the cane and chain.

455972 I hope that's a good "REALLY?!" rather than a bad "REALLY?!" :pinkiehappy:

456000 Instant awesome, just add Sinatra
:rainbowhuh:
I mean Blue Eyes
:rainbowkiss:

457426 Sorry for the confusion! Mint Bullet is the protagonist of a book series that Rarity reads. A quote from one of his books heads each chapter.
Rainbow Dash is the protagonist of the book written by the CMC.
As for reactions... That would be spoliers :trollestia:

460951 Now you see how she gets donations so easily! :pinkiehappy:
Sorry, cane and chain? :rainbowhuh: I'm not sure I follow...

461258
Is the picture not showing up? It's a picture of Spike wearing a white suit, white fedora and gold chain. He's also holding a cane, so remove the chain and cane and there you have your description of spike in your story. Roughly :pinkiehappy:

461468 Phew! I was worried in case this broke the first rule of fanfic-ing: Never write a song-fic :pinkiegasp:

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