Fluttershy and Zecora where searching through the Everfree Forest to find a scared manticore but instead they find a stallion in the forest and just staring in a pond. They try to talk to the stallion but the stallion said nothing and looked confused when they spoke. Luckily they had rope and they put gently around the stallion's neck and the stallion was docile enough for them to lead him to Ponyville's hospital.
There Nurse Redheart is put in charge of this unknown pony and after the tests she combs and trims the stallion's coat which looked like it never been taken care of. In trimming the stallion's flank to find the stallion's flank was blank and shocking her. What will happen next few days for this blank flank stallion with no method commutation or memories.
I like this story, its really good! However i suggest you find an editor...the dialogue is a bit jarring, but nothing a good editor cant fix, regardless well done.
interesting, lets see how you do with this, though you might want to do a once over on the chapters for spelling and grammar
I think I'm in love...