• Member Since 8th Feb, 2012
  • offline last seen Dec 18th, 2012

Sea Blaze


Originally born in Ponyville, absent for 15 years. Now coming back to visit my cousin Pinkie, I'm reunited with my childhood love, and the stories I submit are nothing but the way things happened.

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In a perfect day, almost made for flying, Rainbow Dash positions her new, custom-made headset, and thrusts forward into the open sky. The music pumping in her veins, Rainbow discovers a new ability that she never thought a pegasus could posses.

Her new discovered ability, or more the process of finding it, once again brings the Elements of Harmony together, the Crack in the Sky triggering a reaction inside every pony of the Six Mane, bringing forth the improvement of the Elements.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 5 )

Quite... interesting. Have no idea what this is crossed over with/based on, or if its even original. But good job. A favorite and 4.5 stars!

206785 It's actually entirely original, and inspiration came whilst listening to "Turn it Up" by Sonic Syndicate. Not much of a cross over. Only my mind going nuts. XD:derpytongue2:

206800
Everyone's minds go out of whack once in a while.:pinkiecrazy:

This interesting but is very random and easy to get lost you need to make better descriptions or make chapters longers

Well, I'm a random person in real life anyway, and it's hard to be different in my stories... that's why I was considering remaking a story of derpy.

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