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Darkswirl


Sometimes I like to pretend that I'm good at writing.

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There's a certain holiday that ponies like tuh celebrate every year.

They celebrate it tuh give thanks back tuh the one who stood by 'em in the rain and held 'em up when they felt weak.

Some ponies like tuh take the other out tuh eat, or jus' tuh talk.

Us Apples?

Well, we jus' like tuh ignore it.

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Comments ( 12 )

Though the writing style is rough, this story is very heartfelt.

2557033 Yeah... It's been my first story since a long while.

:applecry: so sweet...
The writing is a little tough, but it got the point across.

AMEN WITH THE LAST PART MY MOM JUST DIED:applecry::fluttercry::fluttercry:BUT IM GETTIN THROUGH!!

Why, if here were here now there ain't a darn thing that'd be able tuh bother him.

That accent.

I knew this would be a good one/ And it became a good one! A noble date to break the silence, too.

2565617 Did... Did you just compliment me?

WHO ARE YOU AND WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH THE REAL CHAO?!

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I... Four days weekend... every day spent with friends... the agony... it's too much... :raritydespair:

But I assure you that I had to think three times whether I could stand the accent or not.

2566940 I have no idea what you said in the second sentence, but ok. :pinkiehappy:

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Nevermind sense, let's just be happy with the good story. :pinkiehappy:

We better print this out.

I think I just learned a lesson from Applejack..and you.. :twilightsmile: I'm gonna love my mother up no matter what she says! :raritywink:

Very good story.

Silver out!

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