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sparkleblade1205


the rain may fill the holes in the streets but it will NEVER fill the whole in my heart

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!!! 2017 MOVIE SPOILERS BELOW !!!

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fanart · 8:03pm Dec 16th, 2017

omg it's not even up yet and my bestie alreayd made me some really great fan art

I'm so happy I could die

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one of your pics is broken

Hey, welcome to FiMfiction. Looks like you’re already making a bit of a splash!

Quick thing here, though: your profile description needs a quick edit. Allow me...

the rain may fill the holes in the streets but it will NEVER fill the whole in my heart

Should probably start with a capital, add a comma before “but,” and it should be “hole” not “whole.” Should probably punctuate it too. Like this...

The rain may fill the holes in the streets, but it will NEVER fill the hole in my heart!

Just a friendly tip. A sloppy profile tag might be a sign of warning to folks visiting your main page. Anyway, good luck with your writing! :pinkiesmile:

hi bb! <3 <3 <3 (─‿‿─)♡



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thank you!! i probably won't though.

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