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WaffleBandito


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What a bastard. A guy disliked it already.

SPIIIIIIIIIKE! You uppity son of a-*BOOM*

2512482 Definitely doing that for the last chapter.

2512531
HELL FUCKING YES!:rainbowkiss:
I'm gonna be reading this then!:rainbowdetermined2:

Oh mah gawddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
This will be worth it

2512531 Garble: "SPIIIIIIIKE! You uppity son of a... *Boom*"

2513996 Somehow you knew exactly who I had in mind to be him. :rainbowhuh:

Interesting. If I could offer my two cents bits: Diverge a little from the movie. It was certainly good, and I will be tracking this, but the story would benefit greatly from some original material alongside that of the movie; I dunno, maybe change the characters' back stories a little or something. Just something to chew on.

Also, the first thing that came into my head when I saw this was Spike standing at a bar saying "The 'E' is silent".:moustache:
I then proceeded to snicker to myself for 3 minutes about it.:rainbowlaugh:
And then I was ashamed.:facehoof:

2514785 I'm definitely changing several characters significantly. By several, I mean any number that's less than 3. I may have Spike not be a keen on shot with a pistol.

Some parts in this, it's going to feel like Family Guy: Blue Harvest where it's basically the same thing as A New Hope, but with some changed elements and other parts. I'm going to have to try and spruce around with some scenes, either deleting them all together, or completely changing them. Hell I might even add something, I don't know, I'll see what happens. :twilightblush:

I like this story, reminds me of my style of storytelling. I think it will go far. Best of luck and hope it get's to the main page, because there's hardly any good mature stories that they put up.

Was that last line a double pun?

More like permanent hiatus...

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