Is knowing how it all ends a curse or a blessing?
And can you ever really know the end without knowing the beginning?
Cover Image: 'Falling' by Ventious
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Timefly
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That's pretty much all i've got at this hour
but very well written here
You brought a tear to my eye. I say f**k you. Good story
...I'm not leaving this page until I see more.
Why does it say completed? When it hasnt shown us why twilight killed ponies
220815
Just uploaded part 2. That's visible, right?
220819
What do you mean you just uploaded with pine leaveing twilight and the party going on or a third part to the story?
220841
So the ending wasn't clear?
220862
It doesn't really tell who she killed and why. all it shows to me is a party and pine leaving twilight
220872
There's the scene, though, where Spike comes home and finds the body under the pile of books. The next scene goes backwards to earlier in the night, and explains about Twilight piling him under all those book, crushing him to death. Right, I'll make it clearer.
220872
Changed the second to last sentence to make it more clear, and added a little caption indicating a time skip.
220945
Much better. + 5 Blocks to you sir.
That was... interesting. I thought that there's gonna be a serious political intrigue or something. I must say that I'm suprised.
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Good surprised, bad surprised?
I knew it would be a gamble to do this, but I had a go. Was pretty fun to right, though.
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Hard to say, both I think. Twi seems to be little OOC to me. But that's only my worthless opinion.
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Hardly worthless, all opinions are good opinions.
Yeah, I know what you mean, I suppose that's the bad thing about this ending.
I suppose I could always do an alternate ending, but it won't be anytime soon.
WAHHHH!