It's Spike's last night before the rest of his life begins and he's going to spend it alone...
Much thanks to Vanner for reviewing and proofreading. It was of great help.
Also, I'd just like to thank the Brony community from the bottom of my heart, for being so loving and tolerant of such a massive troll...
Brohooves all round.
Please comment and rate. I love to know what people think. Much appreciated.
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very good, very sad. I loved it, and I'm glad I read it. Just, it would be a little better if you took out 'dumbass' it kind of killed the mood for me. It's just I wouldn't expect Spike to swear. Maybe you could say 'sillyfilly' or 'fillyfooler'. something that goes a long with the show.
Great work of fiction, keep it up. 5 out of 5
Hmmmhhmm..
Very nice.
Cheers
~iraqlobstah
he is gonna kill himself
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I don't know see. I wanted a word to portray strong emotion but I didn't want to unnecessarily crude. So I settled on dumbass. I'm not really sure how well something along the lines of 'fillyfooler' portrays what I'm trying to get across. I'll ponder upon that one.
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Thanks.
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Is that how it comes off?
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how's "idiot" work for a self-insult?
It's nice to see these two characters getting some interaction (I would be lying if I said the characters tagged weren't the main reason for me reading it). It was well written, short and sweet. I really like the short poem at the end, but wonder what it implies. Someone's fallen in love, I wonder who it could be...
I feel happy for Spike now. I kinda want to read a follow up, but I guess this ending is satisfactory...
I think that half the people arround this site have suicidal tendencies
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No it dosn't give you the slightest idea that Spike is going to kill himself, but just here I have already read about three stories where he does it
Forgeting about that, great story, straight to the point, well written and flows nicely
Keep up the good work
Nah, I'm just being a dick, thats all, great work, fuggetaboudit!
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Naa, thanks but I've decided to stick with it. He's growing up and while swearing doesn't make someone seem any more mature, it does signify a loss innocence.
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The 'poem' is the song 'Falling' by Florence and the Machine. I wrote this fic in order to try and express what one on my favourite songs meant to me. I'll leave the rest for you to interpret...
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Who writes these stories. That's so depressing.
ANyway, thanks man.
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Okaysurewhynot, but I did think about...
See above.
Very nice story, few grammatical errors here and there but nothin' major.
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What be they?
I shall fix them with pleasure.
" Dismissing the though as foalish"
Thats the only one I remember right now, I'll re-read it in a bit !
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Kk, thanks.
Sequel please i cryed like a man with this
4780719 Hehehe
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This was sweet, I kind of wish there were more but...it's good the way it is.
4786516 alright
4786544 only the bit before the ----- was for you. Hehe sorry if I confused you in any way.
4786569 so wait there is going to be another story
4786978 I don't know
is there?
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up to the writer
4789090 awwwhh
to the writer: WE BEG OF YOU! pleasee bring us more of this wonderful SpikeDash ship! For it is cute and full of wonder!
4789135 yeah
4789184 Ha! Knew you came from the SpikeDash group
SpikeDash is cutest fic! We need more SpikeDash! SpikeDash FTW!
Oh! What's your favourite SpikeDash fic so far?
4789203https://www.fimfiction.net/story/198500/about-last-night
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/171729/spikedash-group-collab
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/183635/the-best-bachelor-party-ever
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/177732/the-selfish-one
These
4789428 Oh? you rank 'About Last Night' as one of your favourites? Danke!
i'll check 'The Selfish One' out, don't think I've read that yet
4789668 oh look at this it's alive
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/125678/a-game-of-survival
4791620 I uh, hehe, already read it
I was the one shouting Satanic rituals for another update
4793216 oh yeah that's right
4793699 Wow, we really spammed this up huh?
God i'm such an idiot
Oh and I triple posted
4793739 could be worse
4793752 ...Do you want to make it worse?
4793769 nope
4793826 Well you're no fun
4793831 hupla dula boo boo
4793924 [youtube=utFRqsT61-k]
4794777 hey let tack this war to my home page not here
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=5qa6KIomTRg
4795307 Lets just end this 'war ' now..
I'm getting tired
4795460 OK I sign this treaty that clams peace and now have a good life see you again soon bye