I AM FIXING IT!!!!! · 10:19pm Dec 13th, 2011
I noticed a lot of people complaining about the robotic dialogue, pushover guards, and plot foils. Soooo.... I am in the process of editing the first 3 parts. I wrote the first 3 parts late at night due to a conflicting schedule. Everything will be fixed. I also have 2 other ponies to read it before publishing now! I hope everyone understands! Thank you!