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Scootaloo has been flightless her whole life, unknown to most ponies.
but when Diamond Tiara threatens to post an embarrasing photo, she relises they will all know her secret.
and so to prove herself, she tries to fly but gets hurt, revealing this problem to rainbow dash.
the pegasus tries to help scootaloo, but the filly rejects her help saying she is 'useless' but Rainbow dissmisses it as being 'chicken'
furious, the filly charges out of ponyville and demands help from Queen Chrysalis and upon becoming a changeling, scootaloo can fly and she proudly shows off to everpony.

but will there be consequesces?

(Takes place around the 'Ponyville Confidential' episode in season 2)
(dont dislike over puntuation, spelling or grammer. i'm not exactly passing english at the moment... i know the description is kinda lame, but hey. at least it's something.)

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 15 )

'Scootaloo cut in, g her head' I think that 'g' be 'hitting'.
'that have made t very' I that should be 'it'.

Apart from that, I like it. And I hope their will be a happy ending, but if not I will take Scootaloo flightlessness and all. :heart:

2480201
You all know that Scootaloo was planned, by Lauren herself, never to fly, right? She had a disease that would prevent her from ever flying. But, there's nothing to say that she can't become a Changeling and "change" that.:scootangel:

2481063

I know she was planned not to be able to fly...
It's just...I would like nothing more than to see her fly...
But, If that meant that she had to 'change', then she wouldn't be the sweet filly I once loved...
I would accept her, flightlessness and all. :heart:

2481198
I've got ideas for a story that I want to write, and one of the scenes will deal with Scoot and her inability to fly.

Aww, poor Scootaloo! :fluttercry:

The next chapter should be good, with this author's skill! Keep it up! :twilightsmile:

2481063 yea but thats kinda the plot :raritywink: she wants to become a changeling not only because of the fact she cant fly, but because she is sick of ponies walking all over her and calling her 'chicken' and nopony really caring bout her properly.... but i dont wanna give too much away :twilightsheepish:

2480201 yeah, sorry bout the errors, i write the stories on a word2010 document, then copy and paste. i dont bother checking for errors really, im too lazy for that lolz! :derpytongue2:

hehe moustache! :moustache:

2484786 No need to apologies for your mistakes. Nobody apologies for practicing. Just keep it up. :raritywink:

There's Mr. Mister

any chance of an update soon? 'cos I mean if its been this long and its not complete? :rainbowderp:

2732763 i know I should update it but.... I never really thought it through when I started it so ive kindof just dumped the story... I might add to it, but im currently working on a total drama fanfic all about Mike and Mal, so it might be a long time before anything new is done... sorry :fluttercry: :applecry:

When's the next chapter

3918124
Well, THAT is depressing... :raritycry:

Are there any plans to complete this story? I ask because I am going to favorite this because the plot behind it sounds interesting. HOWEVER, until it is completed, I am going to give it a thumbs down. Because while I may approve of the plot behind the story, I DO NOT approve of the fact that it has been 1 year, 8 months, 2 weeks, and 1 day since the last update. I mean, I understand that greatness can't be rushed, but needing 625 days in order to update the next chapter means one of three things. A: You've given up on the book (this is the most likely scenario). B: You’re too busy to write any more (this is understandable, even if highly annoying). Or C: You're dead (this is a scenario with a 50% probability chance, seeing as how people die every day.) If option C makes you feel uncomfortable than that means two things. You are obviously not dead, and I am sorry for having that as one of the three possibilities. Also, don’t give up! Your fans deserve better! I, of course, meant that in the best and most encouraging possible way.

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