438925 thanks

It has been a couple months since I last checked out the page. Your making great progress.

Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash are my favourite ponies too!

Is too much of a conicidence that my story is similiar to yours? Like this section;

“Nah! I’t ain’t okay! Why did yah keep this a secret from us Rainbow?!”

“…Applejack….. i-im…. S-s-sorry…”

“So it is true then?” fluttershy’s quiet voice was almost unheard in the room but Rainbow somehow heard her and took awhile to collect herself before answering, “…yeah…. I-im so s-sorry for not s-saying anything… even though there is nothing to be said…”

“Nothin’ tah be said?!”

“Applejack…” Twilight began.

“ah mean, seriously Rainbow! Yah are a bloody mother tah Scootaloo and yer say there is nothin’ tah be said?!”

Rainbow turned her back on her friends and began sobbing, quite loudly, despite efforts of Pinkie trying to cheer her up.

“APPLEJACK!!” Twilight yelled. “Look, I think you’ve done enough.”

That was from your story.

"So it is true!"

Rainbow was silent and still. Tears rolled down her cheeks, but were not visible as her hair covered her face.

"Rainbow, how could yah not tell us? We're yah friends, right?"

The others grew more confused.

Twilight's horn lit up, and so did the folder. She levitated it over and opened it. She, Pinkie, Fluttershy and Rarity scanned the paper inside.

"Rainbow Dash?"

"Surprised huh?! So am ah! I want ta know everything about this!" Applejack slammed her hoof on the table.

"There's nothing to be said." Rainbow muttered.

"Nothing ta be said? Nothing ta be said?! Rainbow! Yal a bloody mother ta Scootaloo, and yah say nothing ta be said!" Applejack yelled.

"Just shut it AJ! It's none of your business! So I don't know why you are going through this!" Rainbow shouted back.

"Ah didn't find it. Scootaloo did. She told me tha she wanted ta find her real mum. She wanted ta know why she was dumped in a orphange!"

"I had no other choice." Rainbow started to cry. "I had no other choice."

"What do yah mean?! Tha filly is homeless, alone, no pony ta care for her! Yah nothing Rainbow! Pathetic! Selfish!"

"Selfish? Selfish?! You are calling protecting your daughter's life selfish?! I had to leave her!"

"No didn't! Yah coulda kept her. Cherished her. Ah guess tha Wonderbolts are more important."

Rainbow broke off into more tears.

Applejack was just about to insult her when she realised what she had just done.

"I had to. If I didn't she would have been killed...by him. I didn't. I didn't want to. But I had to. I wanted to keep her, but it was either keep her and risk her life. Or hide her." Rainbow cried into her hooves.

"Rainbow...ah am sorry...it's just-."

"That's enough Applejack. You've done enough harm to her already." Twilight walked over to the crying pegasus mare.

And that was from mine.

Round about the same.

My story is 'How Close You Are To Me'

Please tell me if you have read it before.

309391 You don't have any Applebloom on your page, So I guessed I'd help you with that