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zyr1987


I'm Zyr1987 (Rhymes with sir) and I'm currently the only person to write stories about Fleur de Lis to any great extent. I also ship extensively and have been taking to combining the two in my stories

Comments ( 15 )

Not going to happen I mean once you write a clop fic there's no going back.

Can't say I expected this. I'm just guessing this takes place after The Model Caretaker (though I haven't read it yet).

Anyway, pretty good first attempt at a clopfic. I can see why you wanted the idea to just come out.

I approve of work such as this. Keep up the great writing!

2471683 I will defy this! I will! :twilightangry2:

2471960 It does, though I admit I'm a bit hesitant to tie a clopfic to another story of mine, which is why I neglected to mention that fact

First--go ahead and Capitalize the First and Time, friend. It helps to capitalize stories to get them looked at.
Second: Jlargent said the same to me... and I ended up writing two or three more.


You're doomed.

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I'm just surprised you wrote this in so much as an hour. I can't even get 500 words out in an hour.

2473178 Same here man.
Also, quite a good first clop fic, actually. There were quite a few errors, nothing too major though. The only main problem was its shortness.
However, with all that said, I greatly enjoyed this story.

2532752 She got divorced in the prequel. Affair

Oh.:twilightoops: well this is awkward.

Three things that i want to say;
1) How did i not notice this sooner.
2) Great job with this.
3) Needed more Jacques, everypony's favorite cat.

:applejackconfused: it's too short! I wanted to keep on reading. Keep a steady pace with the narrative- I need to do that:twilightsheepish: and I can relate. Please make more, I really enjoyed this

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