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Listie The Scribe Maid


Don't mind me, I'm just passing through. I might stop to write a "comedy" story every now and again, but I highly doubt it.

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ACT I: Vinyl gets zapped by... Something and starts feeling... Something for Octavia. I guess it's just... Pomegranates. I dunno. OctaScratch, I guess. Rated "T" because I always bucking do. Why did you expect anything different?

ACT II (THE ABBEY LOAD MEDLEY): Exactly how did Octavia get to PonyVille? And what do you care? Anyways, this won't answer your question, but I dunno. Read it. Rated "T" because Mbc hgroo szhm'g hfxpvw luu Kvm Hgilpv. Zmw yvorvev nv, rg droo yv yfxprmt slg.

BONUS: Mash-ups of Beatle Brony and Metallica songs based off of Sgt. Hetfield's Motorbreath Pub Band, Masterful Mystery Tour and Abbey Load.

A story in two acts, based off of Abbey Load by Beatallica, one of my favorite bands ever. Cover art done by me, vectors done by whoever. I forget.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 8 )

I'm a few lines into it and I have to say, I love this so hard already. If the rest turns out like I think it will, you have my 1000 percent endorsement for this story.

2390822 Is this suppose to make sense? I haven't read it yet BTW.

I love how entirely meta and cracked this story is so far. It makes no sense and has no respect for any fourth wall. That said, what's with Octavia's accent? I shouldn't let that get to me, but it does, if it even is an accent; what's with the random V's instead of W's?

Other than that, though, it was just plain fun. :)

Aaand now I've read chapter 2, which has more plot, and not the kind you could make a joke about. Except the one I just did.

Aaaaanyway, okay, now I get it: Octavia with a German accent instead of the British accent everyone gives her and you're purposefully putting the V's to replace all the W's to be silly, am I right? I'm still going to say the joke works without saying "vho" and "knov," and such, though. Still a fun read. It'll be neat if/when it comes out of hiatus.

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Uh, I think it was because I remembered reading some story where Octavia had a Russian accent, and when I wrote the original, I wanted to do that, too. Clearly that meant, "Chop your W's in half!" Poor things; they never did anything wrong to anybody...

I think one reason why I kept that little bit from the original is because... Well, the original had, so why not this? The fact that (back then) I wanted all my stories to share the same "universe" may have had something to do with it, I dunno. I haven't thought about this story in a long time. Looking at it now, I can see I wasn't even consistent with the whole not Russian accent thing.

Now for whether or not I find the fourth wall stuff I wrote good 105 weeks and one day later. You wanted to know that, didn't you? I did, and all I can say about the fourth wall stuff is that it's...!

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Uhm... Actually, yeah, the accent thing was a joke. As for the story itself, I'm not sure of whether or not I will continue it any time in the future. The next song in Abbey Load is "Michelle", and I'm not quite sure how to adapt that. My original plan was going to involve Vinyl whacking Raindrops on the back of the head to get her to speak French (it works), but I don't know. Besides, I haven't felt particularly inspired to write anything in forever, unless it's RP stuff. Yes, I'm in a pony RP.

Regardless, will this story ever continue? I sort of doubt it. But in case it doesn't, spoiler alert, the whole thing would have turned into a Twilight/Vinyl story because that's what I shipped. Also, the song mash-ups I wrote sucked, and the medley portion wouldn't have been that good either.

Also, the fourth wall stuff is kind of dumb. Not even kind of.

5862850 4th wall jokes are indeed dumb. But I'm a sucker for 'em and I make no apologies. :)

is there gonna be a "Vinyl Crosses Abbey ReLoad"?

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