It had been 20 years since the war of The Sun and The moon. Princess Celestia won and banished her sister to the moon. Life in Equestria thrives and flourish under her reign. But a threat arises from the north.
The sun rises over a small pony settlement in the north-western parts of Equestria. Its name is Vanhoover. It was founded three years ago. There lives a pony that isn't like everypony else. He lives in a cottage at the edge of a town, he only goes into town to buy supplies. He doesn't try to make any friends or being social at all.
One day a young colt decides to go check on this weird stallion, to see if anything is bugging him. What he get to know wasn't what he was expecting.
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This is a good interesting story. The grammar mistakes aren't horrible but a little confusing in some places, I could give it a quick edit if you'd like. I'd like to see more of this story
2436490 If you could do that i would be very happy.
You can send it to this email. Torroja96@hotmail.com
And we will see when i decide to write something on this story.
My focus is right now on Broken wings and broken dreams.
2436549 I sent you the edit. It's fine that you're focusing on that story, I was about to go read Bittersweet memories then Broken Wings and Broken Dreams.
2437378 Thank you
I will actually upload chapter 3 for Broken Wings and Broken Dreams before i go to bed. Max 30 mintues.