Sleeping Rainbow

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Rainbow87dash

Rainbow87dash #1 · Mar 26th, 2013 · 1 · ·

using the word Vagina too much makes it seem weird to me

spider8itch

spider8itch #2 · Mar 26th, 2013 · 1 · 4 ·

Ariaks

Ariaks #3 · Mar 26th, 2013 · · ·

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I'm pretty sure using other words like "Pussy" probably would have made you feel weirder, though.

The Scratch

The Scratch #4 · Mar 26th, 2013 · · ·

There are tons of other words you can use.. I mean come on http://crisitm.wordpress.com/2011/07/09/erotic-thesaurus-2/#more-164 enjoy

Btw..DAT cover

Rainbow87dash

Rainbow87dash #5 · Mar 26th, 2013 · · ·

2324503 yes but As he > 2324819 said there a tonne of other words you could have used

MageTrollpatrol

MageTrollpatrol #6 · Mar 27th, 2013 · · ·

I've read very few clopfics. The ones I do read though, either end up being ones that make me want to vomit from the sheer vulgarity of it, or burst out laughing. This one made me want to burst out laughing. I can't say it was well written, for I'm not a clopfic fan. I just occasionally read them to see if someone can actually write an erotic fanfiction without making me do one of the above mentioned reactions. But Spike is now a man. Dragon. Thing.

Ariaks

Ariaks #7 · Mar 27th, 2013 · · ·

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I find it hilarious that someone actually gave me a dictionary for perverse words. I will be sure to go back and use some of these words, just because of how funny I find this.

Avant Garden

Avant Garden #8 · Mar 28th, 2013 · · ·

"Several moans escaped the Pink ponies mouth"
*pony's
'Ponies' is the plural form of pony and pink is an adjective in this case so it should not be capitalized.

Ariaks