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DawnCrusade


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Wryn is the last of the Divine Dragons, being the sole survivor of the devistating attack that was led by the Trecherous One, the very human who his parents had given shelter to and cared for. Wryn has taken it upon himself to protect the fragmented Forces of Light, who are scattered across the newly-forming Sphere, the combination of several worlds. These Forces will be of great use to Wryn. . . if they give him a chance that is.

Thus Wryn ends up in Equestria, a strange and mysterious area until he has a run in with Twilight Sparkle.



First things first, thank you very much for deciding to take a peek at my shoddy pensmanship and wild imagination. This setting is a slice of my own "double life". When it gets late I decide to go on an imagination run and think up wild and crazy things. This is my first FIMFanFic so if there is anything that could use improving just leave a comment below, and rating never hurts.

Enjoy!

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 22 )
Ice

Nice, Looking forward to more. Also FIRST.COMMENT.ON.THIS.STORY.EVER.

182038 Thanks a ton, I've been walking along all day with plenty of new ideas and events to place into this story, I hope that you'll like them!

182038
Second! If you don't count author comments.

Good story all the same.

Ice

182055 You could kill somepony off and I reckon I'd like it........then again that sort of thing dosen't really bother me.

Ice

....um, what? I mean fair enough he's in a bind but random crying.....it just dosen't seem right. Good chapter though.

So much... epicness.

and wow poor wyrn now onward and upwards ALLONS-Y finally I had a use to say that :pinkiehappy:

204814 yes much epic fimfiction.net/images/avatars/10118_128.jpg I find this picture epic so it's in my comment

205014
Well thanks. It's a basic reference to my OC Maximillion. Well the outfit anyway. You basically put that outfit on this guy th07.deviantart.net/fs71/150/f/2012/038/c/c/maximillion_fortner_by_camlio-d4oztnf.png In a humanoid form.

207083
Well many thanks. The author of this story is a friend of mine so I'm glad I'm drawing views to his story. He's very good at what he does he just needs someone to help him with pacing.

207097 nah I just like the story in general I just saw your avatar and thought it was cool so I finally found out how to post pictures :pinkiehappy:

first and awesome I was listening to this while I read

"Thanks for the shout-out bro."

Humans as evil things
no

218389 Hey I never said all humans did I?

oh god mad herb I think thats his name thought that Twilight was Max's twilight lol

oh no he's there let the lolz commence :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

also I WIELD THE ALMIGHTY SWORD OF FIRST

aparantly he does anyway i wonder what that flash could mean:rainbowderp:.

An interesting story, I like the beginning!

(Greetings Wryn, this is the mod of Black-Chaos-Marazak. A pleasure!)

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