Twilight is woken in the middle of the night to find the pony she least exspected. Dusk Shine, her altrenate reality counterpart, and he's in pretty bad shape. He comes with a message but not for her. "Save Jubilant, Save Equestria."
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Nice, but you need to space out your paragraphs, touch up a bit on grammar, who is Dusk Shine? and this is an enjoyable story. I'm amazed I got first comment
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I know that I'm not the best at grammar but I'm very glad that my computer has automatic spell check cuz other wise this would riddled with misspelled words.
Who is Dusk Shine... Well Dusk Shine is from an alternate universe where everything is exactly the same as in the usual MLP universe except everyone is the opposite gender and have different names. Here's a link to a gallery with the characters from the alternate universe.
http://trotsworth.deviantart.com/gallery/29830774?offset=0 (They aren't originally mine but they don't really seem to belong to anyone because it's built off of rule 63 which is that For any given male character, there is a female version of that character. And vice versa.)
Their names change though.
Twilight Sparkle is Dusk Shine
Pinkie Pie is Bubble Berry
Rarity is Elusive
Fluttershy is Butterscotch
Rainbow Dash is Rainbow Blitz
Applejack is still Applejack though because Applejack doesn't really lean towards one gender or another.
I hope that helps you understand it better.
2309727
Dusk Shine is pretty much gender bent twilight.
I'm really enjoying this, update soon
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Thank you for favoring. And I plan on hopefully getting it updated again within the next week. I'm currently working on two stories (This one and Why Can't I Remember) and alternating between chapters for both of them. Hopefully I can get an new chapter of Why Can't I remember out today or early tomorrow and then can come back to working on this.