Apparently, science isn't exactly perfect. Even when it's done by the likes of Winston and his genetically enhanced brain. It's just my rotten luck that when it does screw up, it leaves me separated from Earth entirely and completely unable to fulfill my duties as an Overwatch member. But where I end up really did need more heroes.
First I end up having to deal with a war between humans and robots, then I get involved in alien crises just as crazy. Hmph, good for them the cavalry dropped in!
Chapters (3)
Tracer is gonna kick some ass, even if I like Reaper more. Kick some pony ass if necessary.
Overwatch? Tracer? Epic Awesomeness ensuing? Sign me up, love!
I never understand why ponies confused humans with monkeys when they have minotaurs diamond dogs and dragons like spike who are biqeal????
well it was bound to happen.still i cant take any story with tracer seriusly.
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Good start.
I'll be watching.
Umm...
Ummmm...
FINALLY AN OVERWATCH CROSSOVER!
Could do a bit better with the grammar, but nothing too objectable.
I do have a few questions and worries.
Though is there a reason Rainbow was in the Everfree other than plot convienence?
Also hoping there's an actual plot for Tracer in this fic. Tracer's an hero, not someone who'd be willing to settle down.
I'll be following though. Been waiting for a good Overwatch crossover, and I'm hoping this is one.
7206959 I'm not sure if this part was there at the time you were reading, but it is there now, in-between the two parts you quoted:
7206287 Because we are primates?
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Considering grammar is my weakest subject (they seriously need to teach that in schools again) and I was typing this all in a day just as the beta was closing only fueled by an adrenaline high from an epic Tracer triple kill (Which for some reason WASN'T PotG, stupid Bastion).
I'm glad this was actually readable. I'll likely go through it and iron out the kinks more.
Yes and yes.
More!
Yes!Overwatch crossover!
Keep goin' with this,and maybe you can add other characters to this story as well.It's just a suggestion,though I'd love to see you do that.
Cheers Love!
Finally an Overwatch crossover! I'll be waiting for updates.
I played so much overwatch i read Tracer's line with her voice...
Damn end of the month could not come soon enough
"and the everything that happened to me afterwords."
*Afterwards
Otherwise really deep so far.
Repent you heretics! The great Lord GabeN has seen your devotion to this non-steam game and deemed it unacceptable behaviour! Repent and play tf2, your mortal souls depend on it!
7208385 NYET!
Definitely good. An editor would help greatly, but beyond that it looks like you know what you're doing.
If she doesn't say, 'you fuckin Wot mate!?' In a glorious over the top British fashion at least once in this story I will be disappointed!
Favoriting in the hopes of some exaggerated English slang.
"Any o' ya cunts gotta ciggy?"
"Shit it's hot out here. I'm sweatin' me hole out."
7207232 Nah, he must have fixed it. That was decidedly not there when I was reading.
Widowmakers part of the talons?whatever that is?
Im not sure about it, but some trivia; in the soldier 76 trailer origin, you can find both the reapers and widowmakers origin skins fighting alongside soldier
7210285 From what I've read Widowmaker is actually the wife of the former head of Overwatch who was kidnapped and brainwashed into a cold heartless killer. She was then sent back to their HQ and she kills the head in his sleep two weeks after her return. Then she goes back to them and becomes their best assassin.
Could Bastion be apart of this?
7207490 ETA on next chapter?
7241929 Planned to be out on the day of release in celebration. Hopefully I won't be to distracted by the game to publish it, and you won't be too distracted to read it.
Major Freak out in 3..2..1...
Maybe Symentra could bring her back?
Lucio is best support!
There's a few words without letter's but all in all, still good.
Better work with your settings than last time, though there was more room for you to work with this chapter.
Also a decent job of conveying Tracer's demeanor through the text.
Would like to see a bit more of what's going through her head.
Still, looking very much forward to the next chapter.
Unfortunately I don'the have the game yet, but I am enjoying this story greatly!
Wait, why did she suddenly understand "Ponyville" near the end there?
nice story but I am a little confused by this line:
here pistols are holstered in those bracers on her forearms, so is she resting her hand on her other forearm?
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Honestly, I think her translator is picking their language up as time passes. The more it's exposed to the words, the more it can translate, basically, a "learning" dictionary.
At first, it couldn't translate "Ponyville", but, by the time they arrived there, they'd talked with other long enough that it could.
7246395 It was showed in the last chapter that for some words it takes a bit to translate them.
wonder will other operativs or enemies come
btw. i think the time was HIGH NOON
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Ah, right. For some reason I thought it would need some additional context to translate the word. Maybe I mixed it up with some other story with a similar plot device (usually it's a spell
Here we go
So she finally realized...... Welcome to Equestria, Tracer
For those who may not know about Overwatch would you please drop in a description of Winston. I have seen some stuff for the game but there is bound to be people who will not know about the game.
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Not a bad idea, but really it's not hard, especially if you spend even the remotest amount of time on the internet and have seen little bits of Overwatch stuff.
Basically a Disney/Pixar hyper-intelligent anthropomorphic Gorilla who wears square-rim glasses and really loves peanut butter. Bam, Winston. Oh and his voice is like if someone was going for a more sophisticated Thrall from WoW, but he's not voiced by Chris Metzen, he's actually the same voice as Alucard from Hellsing (Crispin Freeman).
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There's also the fact that he grew up on a space station with other genetically enhanced apes and some humans and later the apes overthrew the humans and took over the space station but Winston was sent back to Earth and wanted to help humans because his human was a really nice and inspiring guy named.....Winston.
And don't make him mad. Ever.
Nah.
I'll call you Lena. Formalities and all that, you know.
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And don't bother trying to give him a banana. Unless it's covered in peanut butter. But he'd prefer just the peanut butter.
7248713 Winston is science ape, does it need any more explaining?
7210285 That is because Reaper is an Ex-Overwatch agent (Blackwatch to be precise) and Widowmaker was married to an Overwatch member before she was kidnapped and brainwashed by Talon.
Interesting idea, but at this rate Tracer is going to run out ammunition very quickly.