What if a colt wore a dress? Would you mock him? Would you accept or even like him? Would you... love him?
I am such a colt and this is my story.
Just as a warning, this story deal with crossdressing, so if you don't like crossdressing, just don't read it.
Please leave a comment if you like or dislike this story, so i can improve in my following chapters and stories.
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I like the idea behind this story, and I think its a story that's ripe for telling, but you could really benefit from a good editor. As it is, it's pretty difficult to read.
Definitely need editing. However this is a really touching story on a touchy topic. Keep up the good work after getting an editor.
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I am the editor. Dustshine's native language isn't English , and honestly, I was only looking for grammar errors and the such. Trust me, it was a lot worse when I first read it.
but please, what parts seem "awkward" to you? I am open who is open to advice (not criticism), so let me know!
Eheh I really like this story. I'm no cross dresser but I would never ridicule someone who does. We're all different, and bronies know much about what it feels like to be called weird/strange/creepy etc. I like what you're going for here, and I'm sad to see it's got more dislikes than likes.
Also your story kind of reminds me of a great anime I saw long ago.
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Well what diamond said. My english is far from great, but at least it's readable, i guess.
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I'll. That's why i wanted to write about it, because it is such a touchy topic
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Yes, sometimes it's really discouraging, seeing how people react to things, they don't like or just don't find appealingr. That's why i wanted to write this story to show another view on the thematic.
It's the same like being a brony i guess (can't say i have first hoof expierences since i am not a crossdresser either, but i knew some friends who are. Hey they are perfectly fine how they are.)
I saw the anime too! Great work and it is one of the things that inspires me to write such a story.
And i obviously love strange pairings xD
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Exactly.
And yea, not only is it a sweet/touching topic to delve into, it's also quite a refreshing idea compared to most of the usual stuff we see here. I just want you to know whatever happens, one of those likes came from me, & I'll be around for future chaps if you're planning to continue this down the road!
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I will try to continue going this road. There are a few stories, i feel, need to be told and this is one of them. And thanks for liking it. It's very motivating seeing that at least a few find the story, i try to deliver, interesting enough to follow them.
The second chapter is already done, but needs some editing, so expect a new chapter in the next few days
I finally remembered my username! just for you Dusk Shine :D this story...nuff said.
interesting I'm now curious to read if he make up with his friend and why she got such a problem with the cross dressing.
I actually find this story really cute! PLEASE MAKE MORE CHAPTERS
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I wish I could believe that. But 107 weeks is a long few days.
Lovely story. Here is mine https://www.sofurry.com/view/983394