Now that Twilight Sparkle has joined the ranks of royalty, Luna feels the consequences of her thousand year absence more than ever.
Now that Twilight Sparkle has joined the ranks of royalty, Luna feels the consequences of her thousand year absence more than ever.
Very nice - I like where this is headed.
Pretty good!
Great chapter, one thing though. Majesty, not magesty. Sorry, that just kind of bugged me.
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See, I knew that looked wrong! Thank you!
Go on...
By all means, go on.
The story is really good, but could you maybe think about making the chapters a little bit longer?
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Sure thing!
Working on making my chapters a little longer. Thanks for your patience and support!
Love the concept. Have to say, I'm pretty familiar with it myself. But you're using OCs, and a pair of them, no less! I can't wait to see the contrasts between our stories as they play out.
Luna, just give up already.
Last time you tried that shit, it didn't go down well.
Ooooo looks like i am up for one hell of a good story!
Oh, boy... This'll end badly...
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