Sara, a triceratops, moves to Ponyville. She meets ponies, makes friends and enemies, and saves an entire universe.
My first My Little Pony story. Constructive criticism is welcome. If you don't understand something, ask a question, I should be able to answer it. Hope you enjoy it.
P.s. No spoiler questions
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Is this a sequel to something? i feel like I'm missing out on something here.
2172669 Yeah, sorry about that. I know I kinda just jumped into a world you aren't familiar with. The problem is that the original story takes place in Sauria, and that means that I cannot post it on FIM Fiction. Once again, sorry about jumping in. I hope to allow you to see Sara's past throughout the story. I hope this clears something up.
I think you lost some people with the first few paragraphs, with Sara's special position and her brother's. I liked the story after tht part. Or course, i don't know if it is needed for the plot you have planned.