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Seems to me that shit is going down and it's gonna get worse.
mmmmmmm...blood
Jesus
Fucking
Christ
HOLY SHEET this is getting heavy (oh and this song fits the mood of the chapter http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Va3-PF09pXw&feature=BFa&list=PL05E26083CE89593F&lf=rellist)
Shit had started happening...and then some.
It should've ended with mustache spike going in and capping em all with fire
LOL! I love to see every ones response to this chapter
64131 plz dont tell me you forgot my date with vinyl any way i just submitted my story a second ago
why is cody so evil
he'll just turn into a bitch
64139
I havn't forgot
WHAT THE FUCK HAPPEND!!! OHHH MY FUCKING GOD!!! this is brutal as fuck....
on other note fredic kicks ass
Very nicely done! I wasn't expecting that! More of a chase scene into the everfree but this is twice the awesome.
Very deep words at the end and oh so very true.
64152 fhew i was beging to worry...wait has it switched to the day after the party yet? because if it hasn't i think there is something wrong with my head
64155
Thanks
Also yes, Those just came to mind at the end
64153
I know right
64158
its now been about three days after party
Don't worry, I haven't forgot you
I couldn't get into this one as much. The grammar nazi side of me kept taking control and pointing out every little detail that was wrong with this piece. I won’t lie, it would have made for a good chapter, but I just couldn’t enjoy what I was reading.
You do a great job when it comes to ideas, but try writing this out in Microsoft Word or something and use their spell check system. And TRUST their spell check system. Then learn from what issues it keeps pointing out. It’s pointing those things out to you for a reason.
greg has been hauled home by the royal gaurd? awesome
64153
My character did go "Leeroy Jenkins" over this. As for my swords: true story! I got two swords that I had done that I called Sanger and Yolosh, both sharpened. On my bedside. I keep them clean on a bi-daily basis. Such fun to have katanas!
64169
It's a side I have as well, but I keep that down since I'm horrible at finding my own mistakes. On the other hand, "ruin" was one that had my grammar Nazi scream for the grammar overlord. It was meant to be "rune"
if he starts thinking os suicide im going to become pinkeimina
So is Cody Guna be sent into the sun make it happen or will he be cupcaked muahahahahahajsgahsgavsrahahahahshaha
SHIT
GOT
REAL
BIG
TIME64131
64131 did you have to give him a kid
also KILL THAT BITCH
p.s. moar ditzy doo she is best pony.
Definitely getting more interesting, and I could understand how someone smart could take down those guards who haven't actually seen that much combat in their lives, but I honestly doubt that Cody could've taken down the Captain (Knocking him down), I personally think someone of that rank would have at least seen a small amount of combat, but more than Cody would've. Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter! :D
>>Iron Clad
Well, after the first chapter in this series I turned the little screaming in my head off.
Certain stories are just so good I don't care for the grammar, and this is one of them.
Though something about this chapter...or maybe it's because I spent all day writing a story of my own...
So why did Twilight come with them again? Wouldn't it make more sense if she went to stay at a friends place or something?
64233 is it wrong that i agree with this one? i don't like that cupcakes fanfic, but i HATE that murderer!!!
I thought his name was brohoofs at first o and when am I going to be in
and ajust for the halibut.
Well...that was
a. messed up
b. disturbing
c. crazy
d. sad
e. all of the above
I think that e. fits the question.
That was a good chapter. I wasn't all that much a fan of the killing, but the action was quite good.
Oh, and I see what you did there. (cough cough Batman Dark Knight cough cough.)
Moar Please.
*Insert some intelligent joke there*
Well, bloody chapter, but next, want moar pranks! Maybe want to meet me, to cheer you up!
Nice job, keep up the good work
-Vespi
no more deaths PLEASE!
64565
I would like that, thank you
64778
Well, hey there Major
Everyone else, thanks for the comments.
The next chapter will be like the rest, no violence
Hey mate that was pretty gruesome but it shows off how far this guys is willing to go, i am just hoping that (judging by your last sentence) that he will not end up leaving. His baby will grow with no farther. Never the less great job can not what for the next installment
64813
Yeah, I think this chapter has not pleased everyone. A little grimdark but there's a Purpose to it and you guys will have to keep reading. I have no clue what's next now.
All I hope is that you guys aren't going to back out because this is (as far as I know) the only bloodshed there is. I trust kickass and you guys should give him the chance for he tried something different. I see mixed reactions: people who liked the heroism and action and those who were disgruntled by it. Remember guys: we're thinking humans. And bloodlust is something humans are infamous for. Our hosts (ponies) solve things the way we truly should. They have never experienced humans so this notion is just as alien to them as for us finding new life somewhere else. Hopefully you guys are going to keep supporting him all the way through this story.
okay dont get me wrong, i LOVE your story. but i think its time for one little grammar lesson.
When you have a plural subject (they, we, the royal guards, thirteen pinkie pies), you use "were", not "was".
so it'd be: They were eating.
We were flying.
The royal guards were massacred in this chapter.
Thirteen Pinkie Pies were busy creating dark matter.
thanks! other than that, KEEP BEING AWESOME!!!!!
Holy Fuck!
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64813 You just gave me another idea!
65027
Bronies using memes? Impossibru!
65055 LOL, now you notice?
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65055 LOL, now you notice?
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FUUUUUUUUUU-
65069*facehoof* USE THE IMAGE URL
64813
Lol you can call me Vespi now, GL with your fic
65364 You should totally use that for your SAS account
Vinyl looks so cute!
64973
Thanks
I tried something different for that chapter. But, don't worry every one, that is going to be the last bloody, violent chapter for a while. Now going back to peace and fun
Wait one more chapter before coming to a conclusion about the story
65372
lol, got it Vespi
65461 WHAT?!, YOURE GUNNA END THE STORY?!?!
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65461 If you TRY to end this story, don't be suprised, if somepony will call you and tell you "7 DAYS!"
65469
no, misunderstanding. I mean, I'm going back to the way I use to do the chapters, back like 3 chapters
65462 NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Y U ENDING IT just don't for get about my vinyl OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND TURN YOU INTO CUPCAKES
65507i hate commenting late...
65507OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH
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