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SugarRush


I am a very devoted brony. But there just isnt enough time to embrace it!! D:< Love and tolerance people! Love and tolerance!

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Lukas comes to Luna Academy, where he feels like a total outsider. His only consolation is his Double Bass. Will he ever find a friend?

I KNOW OCTAVIA PLAYS THE CELLO! I WROTE THIS A WHILE AGO!!!(rant over)


Picture Soure: The Internet

Accompanied by Steven Hinrichs

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 4 )
#1 · Jan 27th, 2012 · · ·

Actually, it is a double bass, so you don't need to worry about that.

I was slightly confused with this.
You use words like 'person' and 'hand' in a pony universe. Either they were mistakes (of which I have made countless times :D) or you haven't quite made clear the time and place this is set.
And yes, Octavia plays double bass as said beforre ^^
I think perhaps this could have been sent round your friends first, just to clear errors like these, but other than that, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Haha thanks you guys! I made this for an English assignment so I decided to make it a fanfic. So I subtled it down for the humans out there. I'm glad you like it. But as you can see. This is complete.

164722 And also to add to the sheer weirdness of the story, (but not nearly as much as my other, check it out if you feel like! It's free!) this is set on Earth, although I did not add a "Human" tag. Mistake on my part. :facehoof:
And also, I would like to thank you for taking the time to read my humble story, and I just got fimfiction.net back from the SSL certificate headache that is my computer. So expect some fics if time allots and I actually have some good ideas for a story. So if you would like to request something appropriate for me to take a hoof at, it would be graciously appreciated. Long comment over and out!

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