As the Crusaders make their way back from one disaster, they stumble across the makings of a new one as they spot one pony spying on another. Not ones to miss out, they blackmail the pony before offering their services as match-maker once more.
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Well, you managed to make me laugh, so that's an instant like.
Just one minor niggle:
“That’ll be a synch!”
^^ I think you meant 'cinch' there.
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Thanks!
lol, damn! You are right! Taken care of
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They do seem to possess a mean-streak that is comparable to Discord's. It's of little wonder why those three were able to release him
As for Lyra...someone had to take one for the team. I wonder who is next?!
Poor Lyra. I lol'ed with the “She has a restraining order against him.” part.
Gangster Cutie Mark Crusaders XD
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"She's just playing hard to get"
Im glad you enjoyed it!
I can't sleep... again XD
I'm gonna reread the story and maybe make some silly storyboard about it... the bookstore scene is hilarious :P
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Story board? What are you planning Aby...
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I was planning an animation, basically to try what I have learned about flash... but they are just drawings as a hobby :) I will show them to you later XD I have to improve my hand drawing skills
Hehehe, very nice! That's one way to make sure that Lyra is always on Bon Bon's mind
> I'm surprised this didn't turn sexual, knowing you Fitz. I don't know if I'm disappointed or not.
> Holy shit, there were a lot of fandom nods in this. Flutterrage? Orphaned Scootaloo? You gilded fag.
> Navigating between the three fillies got confusing as utter shit at certain times. You should have put up a warning: "don't read if you're buzzed".
> Really would've appreciated a better explanation of what the heck Bon Bon sounded like, exactly... Wait a second... Was that even Bon Bon?
Well, those are my three minor grievances. And my resigned disappointment about the lack of a certain... thing. Other than that, this story produced some confused laughs. Honestly, I don't think you're the type of person who 'tries' comedy, Fitz. You're the type of person who makes comedy. Also, I've never actually seen the manipulative CMC angle. I welcome this. This might just be my new favourite headcanon. I will never watch a CMC episode again without considering the events of this story completely canon.
If there's one underlying complaint I have, though... how the Hell is the title at all relevant to the events of the story?
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I wouldn't turn a casual experience with the cmc's into something sexual…on purpose at least. It'd have to be spur of the moment. Like the ice cream idea.
I figured allowing the reader to know who was speaking by their personality (or in AB's case, their slight accent) was better than drowning them in "so and so said".
The part about Bon Bon's voice is two fold. I'm from Wisconsin, so the cows mating is a joke. That should be self-explanatory from there. Also, it's natural I'd pick the worse voice they gave her, which was her at the market in Call of the Cutie. An obese, asthmatic, shut-in attempting to reach across the table for their sundae describes her best.
I can't see the CMCs as anything other than manipulative. Maybe not as hardcore as I made them out to be, but their personalities - with the exception of Scootaloo, clearly - allows them to be manipulative without overdoing it.
The title, as all of mine are, is open to interpretation. Find your own explanation and go with it.