I Missed You, Mommy

You follow a newborn filly as she learns about the world around her, moving from challenge to challenge as she seeks the lone goal that will fulfill her curiosity. Some things, however, are beyond the understanding of naive foals.

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flecdorbee

flecdorbee #1 · Jan 25th, 2013 · · ·

this was excellently written. the style complimented the foal's mindset. 10\10

Account Is Dead

Account Is Dead #2 · Jan 3rd, 2014 · · ·

Civ

Civ #3 · Jan 7th, 2014 · · ·

3723718
Too bad, get off my couch.

Account Is Dead

Account Is Dead #4 · Jan 7th, 2014 · · ·

3749740 Fuck you, ma! I do what I want!

Civ

Civ #5 · Jan 8th, 2014 · · ·

3751024
Why don't you get a real job?! You're a lazy deadbeat, just like your no-good father! God rest his soul.

Account Is Dead

Account Is Dead #6 · Jan 8th, 2014 · · ·

3751721 Ma! Seriously! Shut the fuck up! I'm trying to watch My Little Pony, here!

Civ

Civ #7 · Jan 8th, 2014 · · ·

3751825
Oh. My. GOD! Just admit to being a faggot already and be like your cousin! Someone's glittery bitch over on Broadway! Maybe Elton John or NPH will pick you up. But with your luck, you'll get Tom Cruise.

Account Is Dead

Account Is Dead #8 · Jan 8th, 2014 · · ·

3751914 That's fine, bitch! 'Casue Minority Report is, like, the best film ever!

marineproductions100

marineproductions100 #9 · Feb 5th, 2014 · · ·

3749740

3723718

Ummm........what did I walk into? I'm scared.

marineproductions100

marineproductions100 #10 · Feb 5th, 2014 · · ·

Good story. Unexpected ending. Really....unexpected. Still good.

Civ

Civ #11 · Feb 5th, 2014 · · ·

3900482
"Account is dead" is a friend of mine, he just renamed it to that when he abandoned it for another account. But at the time…we just got carried away with whatever it was we were talking about
Being afraid may help you here, since his new account won't be notified you said anything and he would be more than happy to bring you up to speed. I just wouldn't recommend letting him.

And I'm glad you enjoyed the story, kind of a kick to the face when you realize what happened though. The DA version has a LOT of comments stating roughly the same thing.

marineproductions100

marineproductions100 #12 · Feb 6th, 2014 · · ·

3902300 Now I see....I do it with my friend on this website too.....it gets funny sometimes. Only when he's not being an inconceivable bitch. But you didn't hear it from me.