There are some things in life they don't warn you about, such as your wife asking to try new, rather unique things in the bedroom. But to please her, Shining would do damn near anything.
Oh god... This is came out spectacularly. I enjoyed every minute of it, and I can't wait for the next chapter. Heck, if you turned this three-part finale into its own fic and canon, I would follow it in a heartbeat. Filly Aegis was absolutely precious.
I'm just guessing here, but I think that Shining Amour and Cadence are using the spell so much that it's starting to effect their personal timelines some how, changing them into the characters of Aegis and Eros.... Just an idea
I'm slightly concerned that this seemed to slip into AU, but I'll reserve judgement until this either is pulled off well, or drives itself into the ground.
love the AU start, very cute... I am foreseeing a time jump in each other these finale chapters... seeing pivital moments in their lives that lead to their marriage. Though I am curious if this is some kind of spell or something to see the what if or not... we'll just have to see.
When the sound of the hoofsteps stopped, nothing came, but she could feel that the princess was close buy.
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Also, this was unexpected though, now that it's here, not completely unwanted. While it does fit in with the theme of the story, it completely ignores the rest of the story itself. Are you planning on connecting this somehow or is this simply going to be a separate story with the same great theme?
2734233 hmmm... alt universe or dream... possibly of Luna's doing. Only other thing I can think of is someone pulling strings and hitting them with an age spell but that seems to be a long shot.
I'm going to go with structured dream. Seems to be the most likely as of the moment. Less effort involved to connect.
2780958 Really? I've noticed several mistakes in each chapter. I'd be more than happy to go through it with you, though. I can also edit new chapters if you want!
However, all that being said, it was still more appealing that being back at school and getting asked about the baby.
I believe that you meant to use "than".
So as far as this story has been going, having young a filly Aegis pop out of the blue was quite possibly the last thing on my mind in regards to the story being adult fiction. This is really very unexpected, but also attention catching. The content is cute, reasonable, and most importantly, heartwarming. I'd expect some leaps in time for the next arcs, so with that in mind, I make a guess that number 2 must be their teen years(also twilight's filly years where she is foalsitted by Eros).
Anything else I'd have to add, is Celestia's speech indirectly referencing Luna. That was some great work getting her to talk like that.
That's all I have to say now. I'll be waitting for the next chapter, cause this one alone captured my interest better than the previous chapters combined. Until then.
don't mean to sound rude or anything but if you like editing maybe you could help me? i'm busy with a little story of my own but i'm afraid it isn't good and my grammar just sucks (due to me being dutch instead of english) if i had someone who would read it first and might be able to edit it, then i would feel much better about uploading it
Um... wat?
Sorry, this came out of left field. When did we enter an AU?
Finale?
nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
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Not AU. It'll be explained in the third part.
D'aww, filly Aegis!
Oh god... This is came out spectacularly. I enjoyed every minute of it, and I can't wait for the next chapter. Heck, if you turned this three-part finale into its own fic and canon, I would follow it in a heartbeat. Filly Aegis was absolutely precious.
Liking this, liking this a lot.
Nice way of bring in Celestia and the troubles that effect every older sibling at some point.
Really interesting. If I haven't favorited this story by now, I would have, just because of this chapter
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Not AU? Then it must be some kind of role play fantasy/illusion or a dream sequence. Did they somehow manage to rope Luna in on this?
Great chapter, really can't wait for the next.
2722924 interesting backstory/story arc you threw at the readers.
Schoolboy/girl crushes are just the cutest aren't they? I can see why Cadance would want to warp reality to see it...
I suspect psychotropic drugs being involved… Just kidding.
I can't deny that this was cute.
Can we have the other two parts please?
even if this was stated as another lifetime, this still makes the story enter the AU tag, regardless if it was only 1 chapter.
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This.
I'm just guessing here, but I think that Shining Amour and Cadence are using the spell so much that it's starting to effect their personal timelines some how, changing them into the characters of Aegis and Eros.... Just an idea
I'm slightly concerned that this seemed to slip into AU, but I'll reserve judgement until this either is pulled off well, or drives itself into the ground.
Let's hope for the best, shall we?
There is so much d'awww in this chapter I was tempted to hug my computer...
cant we see some more Aegis and Cadance lesbian loving? please!!!
so far, so good
Can't this just be a separate, 150000 word long story? This one chapter alone was just precious.
I think I can see where this is heading...
PUPPY LOVE.
Also, that reference to Luna.
I was wondering how you'd continue it, and this was a perfect, yet surprising way to do so.
The only thing that was a bit strange was the "Mary had a lamb" thing, it was odd to see them referencing that.
NITPICKING THOUGH
This was great.
Awesome chapter, but finale? I just want this to keep going!!!
love the AU start, very cute... I am foreseeing a time jump in each other these finale chapters... seeing pivital moments in their lives that lead to their marriage. Though I am curious if this is some kind of spell or something to see the what if or not... we'll just have to see.
I love it!
i'd pay for this to be a spinoff story
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Also, this was unexpected though, now that it's here, not completely unwanted. While it does fit in with the theme of the story, it completely ignores the rest of the story itself. Are you planning on connecting this somehow or is this simply going to be a separate story with the same great theme?
If this turns out to be a past or future reincarnation of Shinning armor and Cadence...
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They're going to be connected.
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hmmm... alt universe or dream... possibly of Luna's doing. Only other thing I can think of is someone pulling strings and hitting them with an age spell but that seems to be a long shot.
I'm going to go with structured dream. Seems to be the most likely as of the moment. Less effort involved to connect.
2724197 Or Shining is reliving his past through a dream, only he's been gender swapped so many times that he's gotten a bit confused.
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Maybe...we will see
After all the chapters of steamy hot sex, this comes as quite a surprise.
It was very cute, though.
Very nice chapter! Would you have any interest in an editor?
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I got someone to look over the chapters before going up before this one was posted.
2780958 Really? I've noticed several mistakes in each chapter. I'd be more than happy to go through it with you, though. I can also edit new chapters if you want!
p.s. I love to edit stories!
Adorable. Adorable and heartwrenching.
I believe that you meant to use "than".
So as far as this story has been going, having young a filly Aegis pop out of the blue was quite possibly the last thing on my mind in regards to the story being adult fiction. This is really very unexpected, but also attention catching. The content is cute, reasonable, and most importantly, heartwarming. I'd expect some leaps in time for the next arcs, so with that in mind, I make a guess that number 2 must be their teen years(also twilight's filly years where she is foalsitted by Eros).
Anything else I'd have to add, is Celestia's speech indirectly referencing Luna. That was some great work getting her to talk like that.
That's all I have to say now. I'll be waitting for the next chapter, cause this one alone captured my interest better than the previous chapters combined. Until then.
Please no out of nowhere explaination or role playing at the end of this, I'll be highly disappointed.
B-b-bububut what happened with Twi and Big Macintosh!
You never elaborated and I want some TwiMac!
(Sorry, big fan of TwiMac)
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don't mean to sound rude or anything but if you like editing maybe you could help me?
i'm busy with a little story of my own but i'm afraid it isn't good and my grammar just sucks (due to me being dutch instead of english)
if i had someone who would read it first and might be able to edit it, then i would feel much better about uploading it
2722924 i like it
Not gonna lie, I would totally have read a full length story about "R63'd Shining Armor and Cadence's foalhood adventures."
this has to be the greatest foalhood story I have read yet and its only the start of the three archs, you my friend still amaze me.
That was a beautiful sorry I loved it all
And how unsurprised am I that this was said? About as surprised as this face ==>
This is amazing! The rest of the story up to this point is good, but this chapter is transcendent.
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Thanks. This seems to be the chapter most people love the most.
No-pony else is gender swiped !?
If so, is Eros the first and only male-alicorn ?