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The chronicles of Shady Bits

A tale about the shopkeeper who sold the alicorn amulet and brought upon him the troubles that come with such dealings.
join us as we follow the shopkeeper shortly after the events of magic duel.

A/N
I know the wiki has named him differently but it sounded too old for me so I decided to use a different name.
First fic so be nice. Constructive criticism is welcome.

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DaemoN67

DaemoN67 #1 · Feb 2nd, 2013 · · ·

I think bits should heist be.

Firebirdbtops

Firebirdbtops #2 · Feb 3rd, 2013 · · ·

There were a lot of errors and you should bring this to another editor, but I'll point out a few for you to be nice. I hope it helps you out.
The sign "Arcana's and mystery's" should be "Arcana and Mysteries" unless there are two other owners besides Shady.
"Were he kept all..." should be "Where he kept all..."
"That's when pony's started coming to his shop" change pony's to ponies.
"Apparently searching for something an particular." an should be in.

darkness dragon

darkness dragon #3 · Feb 3rd, 2013 · · ·

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Thank you very much for pointing those out. Its what i get for not being english,
As far as editors go i dont have anyone else at the moment. Feel free to pm me though. This goes for everyone.