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I take it you're one of those pathetic shit-writers, who don't care for which setting write stories. You didn't even let them stay ponies, almost instantly humanizing them - what, your little brain can't even process writing about ponies?
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And of course people feel the need to abuse others.
Can't you guys comment something nice?
Anyways, it's a good concept. The writing itself needs to be fixed a bit, but other than that,
The reviews here hurt.. very badly. It's not that bad is it?
I guess we wont finish it then.
M/M?
(I'm just poking fun, calm the fuck down)
Yaoi noooooooooooooooooo!
Okay..The the comments hurt (the videos make me laugh tho o_o) but oh well. You think I am gonna stop? Hah! Chapter two is coming, motherbitches. And this time come at us with real creative criticism and some of the poo I read. Btw thank you Nyan-cat. I will try and pay closer attention to the writing.
*The Silver mare nodded viciously in response to her friends rant* that's right. We won't allow you to run us off. Thank you very much Nyan_cat your encouragement helped a great deal and I appreciate you letting me use your about me thing
Anyway Chapter 2 will be better, but more of a clop fic. For those of you who don't like yaoi get the buck out \
2044161 I was just poking fun, don't worry about what I posted. I'm all for whatever kind of relationships are going on.
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I am fine. No worries. Like I said, the videos was all funny
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If they had a Fluttershy squee icon, I'd use it, but I'll have to settle for
Thanks for the shout out, and you're both welcome!
Wow....umm....yeah, this is seriously hard to read. You two need a editor, to be honest. I mean even though it's HIE I like how it is made but....A mortal unicorn kidnapping the Goddess of Love? Is that even possible? Um....odd.
And Spike is the Crystal Savior so of course he is able to defeat Sombra
Have to admit though, that despise it's faults and errors, I'm rather impressed. But seriously, get an editor to re-do this chapter then chapter two before you post it.
Other then you, you have my attention and my fav, not bad...not so bad.
Keep in mind that this is the first and only HIE fic that I shall ever read, if you two were to add fur, tails, etc then I would have been far more impressed. But nonetheless and even though it goes against the fact that I dislike clop for M/M. I'll stay, but like I said...an editor....please?
I like it so far
needs to be touched up though
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anyway i'm glad you liked it. 
Thanks! I gree, now that I have been here a bit longer I see some of the er errors we have made and will improve on the second part. i am one of the writers btw of course I'm sure you knew that
Honestly, I expected a lot worse. Your story is correct, with some mistakes but especially several good ideas ( Like that of human behavior) It is really a pity that it is not straight.