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A Better Tomorrow

Everyday, Scootaloo has to travel these streets. She has to remember that tommorow can be a better day. But how can she have a good outlook if everyday gets worse?

Chapters (6)

Chapter 1: Years of Abandonment · 27th Jan 2013 · 795 words
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Chapter 2: Life Change · 2nd Feb 2013 · 698 words
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Chapter 3: Before Friends · 3rd Feb 2013 · 744 words
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Chapter 4: Truth With Friends · 3rd Feb 2013 · 934 words
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Chapter 5: Saturday With Rainbow Dash · 8th Feb 2013 · 1,551 words
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Chapter 6: Final Days · 9th Feb 2013 · 1,719 words
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irrationalhashbrown

irrationalhashbrown #1 · Feb 3rd, 2013 · · · Chapter 2: Life Change ·

i would like to say that you did a nice job with this. i almost felt sad reading it. apart from a few minor spelling errors that kinda put me off, i do find myself wanting to read more of this story.

reader238

reader238 #2 · Feb 8th, 2013 · · · Chapter 5: Saturday With Rainbow Dash ·

and this is the point where either RD offers her a place to stay or scootaloo panics and flies off

Cold Spike

Cold Spike #3 · Feb 9th, 2013 · · · Chapter 4: Truth With Friends ·

So technically I found not that many grammar mistakes, but stories need spaces in between paragraphs. Still this is an interesting take on 'Scotoaorphan', only ever seen the amnesia card played once before and not this early in the story. So I'm still giving it a chance.