Dinky Hooves, a pony who doesn't feel like she is a pony at all. She extremely smart, she better than anypony in sports, and haves really sharp senses. These are only a few things on her list that she's wondering about. Like for example despite being a unicorn, her mother is a Pegasus with no unicorn background. Also she learned that her father, whom she never met before, was an earth pony!
She can go on and on with the mental list of difference between her and other pony's. She asked her mother why she feels different and the only responce was "becouse you are a very special filly."
Join Dinky as she tries to find out to see if she is just a special filly or something more.
Also who is this brown Earth pony with an hour glass cutie mark keeps stalking her.
[AN] something that I had in my head the last few days and decide to write down not sure on tags. Comment's and critisim is welcomed (as well as proof readers).
I believe this has some potential and I'll be sure to keep a keen eye on this. It is moving at quite a fast pace but that's fine. Can't wait to see more.
Tracked... I am intrigued and wish to see were this goes
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I know it's going a bit fast that's been a problem with me writing since as long as I can remember.
Good Beginning. Looking forward to see where it is going. I like the theory that Dinky is not related to the Doctor but I really want to see where this goes.
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Cant wait for the next chapter!
Short description should say "she has", not "she haves".
Just so ya know.
haves... HAVES!
I like the story, but the way you structure your sentences... It's scaring me off. I hope Ginger is a program and not a proofreader, because Ginger missed a lot.
Interesting story. I want to see where you go with it. Idk if you're planning on going the discorded whooves path or another. Nearly all the fannon shows Derpy being at least friendly towards the Doctor so I'm really curious as to why she feels so differently in this story.
Also check your spelling. You switched haves and has a lot, along with a few other mistakes.
a LOT of grammar mistakes, I suggest having a proof-reader check this stuff out before you publish it, or maybe just go back and fix the obvious mistakes.
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I know I know. I make these stores late at night plus my computer is broken so I can't use ginger.
Also do any of you know where I can find a proof-reader
2279217 http://www.paperrater.com/free_paper_grader I use this alot for story writting. It works for me.
"she can read books at an unimaginable speed"
I bet that would make Twilight jealous.
I like this idea, but the grammar is not the best...
As for the link about Gallifreyans......
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I could proof read for you.
love this story cant wait for the next part
Pretty good.
It says on the Gallifreyan physiology website that time lords only needed 1-4 hours of sleep a night, so may I suggest that maybe once in a while dinky gets one hour of sleep, but most of the time she got little sleep, like 2-4 hours.
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So is Dinky the biological daughter of the Doctor, or is she the result of a timelord-pony metacrisis?
There's a few spelling errors here and there,but to be honest,my only problem with this story is that there isn't enough of it! I'm not going to complain,as the author said,updating is hard to do. I hope I can find more stories like this.
MORE CHAPTERS PLZZZz
Still interested in this FYI.
Just in case you thought we weren't