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On one peaceful day in the magical land of Equestria a strange structure arisen from the ground right by ponyville! This structure attracted the attention of everypony in all of Equestria bringing the most renown Equestrian archaeologist to just plain tourists. Just what is it most ponies ask "what is it" and "where did it come from" some thought it is from aliens some think a sign from the lost race of the Humans. However when somepony tries to get near it Multiable objects comes flying at them and if they get hit by said objects they get injured or possibly even killed!

If that wasn't enough who would think that this device was design to control minds, then bring back the lost race of humans falling come crashing down the sky literally, and then the mane 6, the CMC, and others along with the humans Traveling back in time to the fall of humanity the Great World War III

A Command and Conquer Yuri's Revenge and My little pony Friendship is magic Crossover in an alternative Red alert universe where the great war ended in the destruction in the Human race making the plant uninhabitable to humans forcing them to live deep underground or in space.

This is an idea I came up with while playing Yuri revenge and having MLP playing in the background (yes I do this some times)

This is my first attempt at a fan fiction so please go easy on me and yes I know my grimmer and spelling suck so don't be to picky on it. I'm also unsure about the tags as well and I encourage constructive criticism too and ideas as well.

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Comments ( 37 )

Use the picture. Find a prereader. I'd do it but I'm swamped right now. And I'll see if I can add you to the group...:twilightsmile:

Silver out!

YOUR MIND IS YURI'S!

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PS: Commas and Periods (, and .) are your friends. Use them.

So much win, in this that I can't describe. Comrade please continue this is awesome and word's can not descride this. Bring in the big guns the Apocalypse Tank, Kirov Airships, Aircraft Carriers, Prism Tanks and my personal favorite the Chrono Legionaire. Please do so. :twilightsmile:

OK first off like I mentioned before its going to be awhile before Chapter 1 is done do to real life events (like Vacations and learning Java).
But I do hope I will get it done sometime before Independence day.
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Thank you for Adding my story to C&C Headquarters and its alright I'll find a prereader eventually.
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Ahhh Commas and Periods my worse nemesis since 1st grade! hahahaha but seriously I have like a language distorter of some kind:twilightblush:. this is the primary reason my grammar/spelling are crap. But however one of the main reasons I'm writing this fic is to help improve said crappy grammar and spelling. But I'll keep in mind to use more of them Thanks for the advice :twilightsmile:.
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Don't worry you will see all of those... ok maybe not the Aircraft Carriers (Which is a shame since its my second favorite unit :fluttercry: on a side note Chrono Legionaire are my favorite units) I just don't know how i will fit them in since I'm not planning any sea battles right now :ajsleepy:. But I can guaranteed Crono Legionaire and the Prism Tank are going to make an appearance in Chapter 1:raritywink: (I'm still undecided to upgrade them or not since the argument can work both ways ex: its been 2000 years since the war they should be upgraded or Humans never had been on the ground (except for a few hidden research campuses to see if there is a way for humans to live on earth again) over 2000 years they haven't bothered researching new ground weapon tech).

825591 Actually the upgrades would be COMPLETELY LEGIT. As you said, there are also humans underground, correct? Therefore, it's only logical for the tanks to get upgrades. SERIOUS upgrades.

Hu. Right now I'm imagining a Prism Tank or an Apocalypse Tank to somehow.... Ever played Tiberium Sun? Imagine an Apocalypse tank with the Devil's Thonge or Subterranian APC's (both NOD units) underground capabilities (AKA huge drills). And the Kirovs with space capabilities. Now THAT's an upgrade!

Sweet I love it when cross over don't suck horrid eggs. Hell that's why I write them.

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I played all of them (haven't beat all of them yet though). You do make a good point on the upgrades I particularly like the Kirovs one. However its mostly the former allies that are in space (there are soviets in space up thier too bit they manly reatreted underground I will get into more details in chapter 1). Again like I said most of the reasurch done is for the sake of survival but there still weopen development and... You know what never mind you just gave me a really good idea for chapter 1 oh where was I ah yes after the gre- you know what I will leave that thought on hold for now and go in depth into this in chapter 1.

826112 Wanna see them Ion Cann- Oh wait they don't have those in Red Alert.... Or do they?:trollestia:

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don't know I'm a busy man and its going to be awile before I'm done like I said before I'm hopping i will get it done before July 4th.

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Ah the ion cannon my favorite super weopen I was think on adding it but the main setting is going to be 2000 years ago and that time the allies had a weather control device so using a nwlew supper weopen will make them over powered unless I give the soviets a new super weopen to match the ion cannon I still have no plans to adding the ion cannon in so far maybe as camio in chapter 1.

826172 Wait, now you confused me. They're going to go back in time to 2000 years AGO? Ponies aren't supposed to exist 2000 years ago (I think) :facehoof:
I thought you were going to throw them in before the activation of the Psychic Dominator Grid's activation.
Oh well, guess I'll just wait and see :pinkiesmile:

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Sorry to confuse you but basically mane 6, cmc, and other are goning back to the past with the humans I'm not telling how yet that will just ruin the surprise. And to go back like a few days and warn them is unless sense thiers notheing they can do about it since all the satuites can't be moved or risk it falling out of orbit (more detail later) and going back a few years won't help since it was built under ground and under something that was design to withstand the apocalypse I'll explain more on the cocept of time travel in later chapters this is also the reason I was unsure about upgrades but you gave me an idea about that and you'll see what I have planned.

On the side note before signing out is there aren't a lot of humans left (about 10,000 I'm unsure about the number) so to make more fight scenes I have to go back in time where there are a lot more humans and... Wait I could always go to the past and back to the future again so yeah I guess I could do this too. Then that will lead to more fights in equestria man I really want to work on this I now have a bunch of ideas now thanks PS I typed must of my commits on my phone since my sister kicked me off the computer haha. edit: I can edit commits too fixed my grammar a bit but do to phone its kinda hard

The traitor Yuri will die.

Anyways I shall follow this with the force of a thousand Lunas.

There are dreadfully few C&C/MLP:FiM crossovers, but please, please, please, please find a proofreader, there's tons of tiny grammatical errors and punctuation errors.

*screen went into static and an image of Yuri appeared*

- write this in prose form like this

As soon as the president finished talking, the screen began to flicker before it faded into static. As soon as it occurred, the static faded, replaced by the image of a bald man with a goatee. An array of wires protruded from the back of his head. He faced the camera and spoke.

Same goes for other times you do something like that.

830461 I like that line and the way you describe Yuri as well and you are right that was the and thanks for the advice that was the initial plan but it was hard for me to describe Yuri and the Dominator. After failing coming up ways to describe them I became lazy and forgot to describe every thing. Also I was planing to rewrite the prologue after Chapter 1 is fully done mostly do to I came up with some new ideas for the prologue as I was wrighting Chapter 1.
PS can use your description of Yuri in my story

841284, sure!

As for describing things, strike a balance - give us enough to keep us interested but not so much it bogs down the story.

The Nuke Cannon.... Isn't from Zero Hour. It comes in regular GENERALS :twilightsheepish:
Other than that, I kind of see where you're going there, and from the prologue, I can rise these arguments:

1-Ponyville is situated near Berlin.
2-Twilight saw Mojo 1 go dooooooooooooown.
3-Luna know humans (SQUEE)
4-The archaeologists don't really know human architecture that much... Even if Yuri's looks a little bit alien.
5-SOVIET RUSSIA WILL SAY HELLO IN NEXT CHAPTER. CALL BORIS.

913154 Whos that?
and I'm not sure that is command and conquer related (after doing a quick search that is)

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dude,apart the fact that he is russia
this character is completley unrelated to C&C:flutterrage:

Mini-Psychic Dominator Tank [Think of better name and what it dose later]

how about, MPV(mobile psychic vehicle):twilightsmile:

914899>>1096763 rather call boris/tanya :twilightsheepish:

viktor resnov is a COD black ops character

i think the humans need a few thousand apocalypse assault tanks>>1096788

You wanted a upgraded Kirov, well here ya go.

Kirov Mk2, 2x the firepower.

I do not own this, stating the obvious.

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Yes, Red Alert!

Plz keep this one going!

Try something new for a change, No time travel, simply have the ponies start a resistance movement, originating from Canterlot (Celestia knows more than she lets on and got the shield up in time, the mane six were there because it was Grand Galloping Gala time again) and the Crystal empire (they were reverse engineering the spell that hid the area for one thousand years when they recieved a flaming letter to launch it)

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This fic is under major rewrite but either way all my rough drafts leads back to at least one time travel sequence.
Second this was written at the end of season 2 so those drafts are under rewrites too to add season 3 elements.
third I may consider some of those ideas.

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