• Published 22nd Jan 2012
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Final Rest - TheMightyEquestrian47



This is a sequel to the infamous Cupcakes. I made this easier on the audience.

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Epilogue-The Final Letter

Dear Princess Celestia,
It is me your faithful student, Twilight Sparkle. This is my last letter to you for I have passed on. Looking back at the first day you told me to meet friends, I thought it would be a waste of time making friends but seeing all of the great memories I have had with my friends, I don't regret any of it. Now I see Pinkie Pie all by herself, I cannot help but shed a tear for her and wish to come back to her to comfort her in her time of need. But if there was anything I learned from my years being in Ponyville would be Friendship is the most powerful force in Equestria and sometimes you need to sacrifice yourself for the people you love. So when it was my last moment there in Equestria, I knew it was all worthwhile just to see the smiles on my friends faces. So this is my last lesson of friendship I could share with you and it is my time to go onto the great beyond. Farewell Princess Celestia, I wish you the best.
-Your Faithful Student,
Twilight Sparkle

Comments ( 14 )

Interesting Concept, horribly executed. I'm tempted to take over, rewrite it, and show you how it's done. :facehoof:

wat

wat

I....erm.....wut?:rainbowhuh:

You guys don't get it. I do, however. It's a letter that Twilight wrote to the Princess!
No, but seriously. It's a story about how Pinkie Pie regretted what she had done, and her FRIEND sacrificed herself to save her.
You don't know what this is and yet it is right in front of you.
And it shouldn't be rewritten, because it's written fine.

To the author:
You did a good job on this. This is the first story in the dark category that I like. Good job.

150154 thanks I haven't been getting much appreciation for the Epilogue.:fluttercry: i was supposed to end the story at chapter 4 but I was thinking how about add how Twilight would look back onto the situation after she had already died. I could of probally worked it more into the story. Eh well I'll know better for next time.:pinkiesmile:

Sadness I luv dashie and I cry and screamed readeding the original cupcakes :fluttercry: and everyone dieing but pinkie isn't the best way to let her have payback it was still good though :derpytongue2::derpytongue2:

This looks like a job for Mystery Rainbow Theater 3000 (Thank god I'm writing it up as we speak!) :trixieshiftleft:

wow, why do so many people hate this. I :heart: it and it was very touching. and gave me nightmares. :pinkiegasp:

I like it, but it isn't the best. It was somewhat hard to read because you didn't use a new line for speaking parts, but the story was good. Also, good plottwist whereTwilight had to sacrafie herself for Pinkie Pie. Keep it up

This story is awesome!Keep it up!My only complaint is some spelling errors and how you didn't paragraph it...Which makes it kinda hard to read...So far,it's awesome!:twilightsmile::pinkiesmile:

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